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AGE: 31
LOC: Wernersville, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 17

I really don’t know how to describe myself. I try to put my feelings into all my work. I find writing is a way for me to better understand myself. I can take input and look forward to makeing my writings better.

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Novel Treatments / Raindrops on Roses (revised)
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She sat on a wooden deck chair almost as worn as the old gray deck it sat on. Looking out at the lake she could see the sunset shimmer gold flecks over the water, making it look as if hundreds of fire flies were dancing upon the waves. A soft breeze brushed against her face, it was mid July but there was a chill in the mountain air. When she heard the laughter coming from in side the cabin she turned her head, she could see the boys playing, a smile came upon her face then a tear came to her ...
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Poetry / love's revenge
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If love was a dagger It would be filled with venom A poison that kills instantly Your heart left empty None near that cares Something i knew would happen And yet i shared Our lust was hot like white fire Burning and yearning Filled with desire But all that is left is ashes and soot I have no feeling For all that you took Now I am needing My heart is empty and bleeding Why did you say you would care? When you wouldn’t Why did you say you’d stay? When you didn’t Why did you make promises? Never...
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Poetry / Ice
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the sun may shine but the warmth does not touch me the rays do not kiss my face I do not feel the heat cold inside Ice my heart is frozen pain is all i feel the joy i once knew is all a fairy tail the past the future an endless circle repeating again and again in my mind the record skips plays the same song plays the same notes i know them so well they play inside of me noone hears them they are mine writtin in pain sung just the same over and over till i go insane never to end never will i b...
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Novel Treatments / Raindrops on Roses (revised)
Version 1
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She sat on a wooden deck chair almost as worn as the old gray deck it sat on. Looking out at the lake she could see the sunset shimmer gold flecks over the water, making it look as if hundreds of fire flies were dancing upon the waves. A soft breeze brushed against her face, it was mid July but there was a chill in the mountain air. When she heard the laughter coming from in side the cabin she turned her head, she could see the boys playing, a smile came upon her face then a tear came to her ...
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Poetry / Confusion
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Sometimes pain is pleasure Hate is love Kill them with kindness Devour there trust "Believe in forever" It's not always a must To forgive does not mean you'll forget All that they have done to tare you apart They took your heart They scared your soul Now your not you This person has taken control You're mean and cruel You treat people rudely Now you are the fool No one can stand you No one really cares But have they even asked you If you're hurt you would share? If you truly mattered to them ...
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Novel Treatments / Song of Lazarus
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Poetry / Crayon
I am a bit confused....is this a poem or a song? Either way I completely missed the feeling that was o be expressed. I am not a great critic. But based only on the fact that I am a poetry reader and lover. I felt no attachment to this poem it felt more like words just writtin on paper with no real life, no meaning. I am sorry if this offend's. I may have missed the point in your work. I just felt it left me with a cold dead feeling.
Since you asked me I will tell you......first why do you choose not to use any uppercase letters? Second why exactly should I view this as poetry. It feels more like a blog entry. The expressions in the beginning of the poem do not match those at the end of the poem. Your lonely and single in search of the right man and angery that you have yet to find him. OK I get that, now put that anger into a true deep poem. Express those inner most thoughts write it down the writing does not have to mak...
Poetry / Beyond Beautiful
Your writting reflects that of Gothic teen agnst. The feeling you express I understand, the words you use to express that feeling completely lack in that of a true writer. So much could have been said, but was not. I am sure your poem was completely "Awsome" to those that use that term, but to a true poetry lover this poem is completely adolecent. Any value that it had, it lost when i read this sentence-Snoop Dogg hooks, Teen-crushing. What expression is being relected in that sentence? Maybe...
Limericks / Giguere
This was so cute I really did like it alot. It had humor with just a bit of sexual tension. One question...Which "Duck" are you talking about?
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