KindredSpirit's profile

       Hello fellow writers.  My real passion is screenwriting.  I’ve completed two feature length screenplays, one stage play, and three short films (all still in the rewriting process), and just finished outlining a third feature.  I’ve studied screenwriting here in Hawaii and traveled to Los Angeles and London for seminars.  I find it annoying that when I finally spend a good amount of time reviewing a screenplay here on Urbis it rarely gets opened because the writer seems to have disappeared from the site ages ago.

       I like Urbis immensely and thank some of the more experienced writers for beating me over the head with what constitutes a helpful review.  

       I will try to stay focused on the piece I’m reviewing and off…

       Hello fellow writers.  My real passion is screenwriting.  I’ve completed two feature length screenplays, one stage play, and three short films (all still in the rewriting process), and just finished outlining a third feature.  I’ve studied screenwriting here in Hawaii and traveled to Los Angeles and London for seminars.  I find it annoying that when I finally spend a good amount of time reviewing a screenplay here on Urbis it rarely gets opened because the writer seems to have disappeared from the site ages ago.

       I like Urbis immensely and thank some of the more experienced writers for beating me over the head with what constitutes a helpful review.  

       I will try to stay focused on the piece I’m reviewing and offer constructive criticism so as not to waste your credits.  Please do the same for me.  You can tear me apart, but be constructive.  Give me something I can use to fix what is there, not your version of what you think it should be instead.  Aloha.