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AGE: 15
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 09

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Journalism / Music Review
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2 Reviews   0 Comments
You know when it happens, you're listening to the radio or you're on Youtube, mindlessly sitting their, or perhaps standing, maybe dancing, you could even be knitting. Then it happens, a song comes on that you instantly connect with. You love every aspect of it, the lyrics the melodies the chorus. You anxiously look for the bands myspace page squeezing your husbands hand, screaming in pain. You hear a little cry, the doctor hands over a little bundle of joy and then it happens, you're new fav...
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Lyrics / Paper Houses
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Paper Houses, and Paper Letters. They fill the sky. They make me feel better. The dances we miss, But we make our own. The flowers we pick, While the sun shone. I appreciate you, I appreciate you both. You make me happy, But happiness requires growth. We make our pact, promises. We create our oath. Paper Houses, and Paper Letters disappear in the rain. The ground becomes wetter. We shall never fear, For this thing can only get better. It rains on their dances, But we have no regrets. We'll di...
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Lyrics / Small Numbers
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Its only getting faster This thing, its nothing more than a disaster Because 15 means nothing Yet 9 to 10 could easily be something Its the pits you have to worry about Perhaps the can lead me somewhere But who will stay with me? No one? perhaps they all shall leave But who will remember me? No one, they're all too proud to grieve. Keep in mind, the big numbers equal nothing. The smaller ones, they should keep you hunting. The pits, dark, black and cold. You may be scared, but it's there that...
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Poetry / Politricks
I think this is interestingly written. How you describe things and just change to another subject. "Apple pie, not strudel." is a good sentence, it caught my attention. To me it comes across sort of darkly humorous, but I might be way off. Your word choice is good and how it develops is interesting. The last line is wonderful.
this poem is very strange, but it is very interesting. You immediately capture the readers attention in the first and second lines, and as the poem continues it grows more ominous and a bit disturbing, but still amazing. One of the best poems I've read on this website so far.
Poetry / Doodling
This is really nice. Your word choice is good, although the poem its self is a little unclear, its still a good poem. I think is thought provoking and comes across well to readers. x
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this is lovely. you have wondeful word choice and it really paints a picture. you're very talented. x
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