I found this work a little vague it didnt draw me into it. It was well written just didnt really grab me that was all.

True Dat ... Yeah I was struck by the upper case through out use which shouted its message at me clearly for effect you could have started wiht lower case and gone into upper case as the crescendo built. Very well written and gripping piece of work that I enjoyed it didnt allow you to settle into it. Name dropping was irrelevant but that added to the content in my opinion you just skipped the names which meant youreyes didnt get the chance to settle down which I love in writing. Great work we...

Sorry I didnt enjoy this piece it said nothing in a none discript way to me. It is only an opinion and I am sorry if it is negative. I liked the fact thatit seemed to make sense but it failed to grab my attention.

Well written but confused me totally. I didnt get it to be honest. The nose hitting the glass I guess was the person getting too close to the mirror but I didnt get the connection.

I enjoyed this piece. I always liken the sea to instability that combined with the imagery contained in a strong tree this gives a good balance to the poem generally. Well written and made good sense to me. I dont really give advice sorry I can only comment on the way the poem made me feel and it felt good.

I quite enjoyed this although it seemed to stutter a little in terms of structure. An interesting analygy though one person needing another to survive and yet you get the sensation that one is wishing the other to flater. Interesting

I had difficulty in envisioning the subject matter. I can see elements of war and the futility of it but I found myself not quite "getting the message" towards the end. Good solid pitures and I guess the fact that I cam out of the poem realising the subject matter at all was because of the well written images.

Sorry I had alot of trouble with this piece I couldnt quite get to grip with what was being said at all. I also couldnt quite find the rhythym nor structure. I kind of lost was being said and couldnt understand it on first reading.

Very funny. I love swearing in poetry it kind of makes it real, then again I am a drummer in a rock band so I would like swearing. Seems almost like two poems in its structure the change over from one to the other seems a little vague although I can see a link. The rhythym wasnt quite right for me although the work is good and was enjoyable to read. Nice one frugal b'stard hahaha

Well written but left me not quite getting it in terms of what the poem was about. It seemed to be an aimless wander but there were some strong images contained within the poem. I do like the use of colours within poetry to ascimulate sensations like touch and sight. Overall I enjoyed it although I didnt quite understand it but I guess that is the nature of poetry you dont so much have to understand it as feel it in which case good job !