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AGE:
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LOC: Plano, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 27
LOC: Plano, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 27
I like writing that is passionate and refreshingly different.
I dislike most poetry people write because it seems self indulgent or contrived. I especially gag at rhyming poetry as it is the most amateurish and often abused.
I provide honest opinions or I hold my tongue.
I don’t like games or bullshit and I like direct writing and prose.
I am also against any form of censorship. Words need to be free in order to be alive with ideas. You might be offended by somebodies thoughts, but it’s better to grow thicker skin than to ride the slippery slope of censored silence.
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Love lingers long luxuriating and not lessening learning and not languishing laughing and not lamenting lovers live and lust for leisurly loving liberation.
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We are like two astral bodies, our souls trapped in each others gravity. The weight of our love pulls us together. Grows stronger as we become closer. If we gave into those feelings completely we might collide. If we fall headlong into it with no care for our future we may miss each other and be flung wide into the cosmos. If we slow that collision, struggle just a little against the titanic pull of our love we will orbit each other forever locked in our loves embrace. Do not think of a relat...
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what is this this pain without you I am hysteria my mind focuses on your absence and I wonder if you will ever return I am a caveman wondering if the sun will ever come up again. 2 hours without you and you invade my dreams 2 days without you and my body curls and writhes like an addict with junk sickness time becomes my enemy it is the fire in which I burn I am burning for you measuring second to second to ensure time flows I want to ride that river and flow into you I want to hold your body...
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The afternoon sun beat down with a gravity that flattened the soul. I had been behind a few cars for several miles. We each kept getting faster every mile we put behind us. By the time we went from I-15 to I-20 we were over 100mph. I assumed we would continue to increase speed but we did not. 2 of the members of our high speed ring were driving truck types, limited to 105 by some cruel governor. Never the less, I reached speeds in excess of 120mph on those long stretches of asphalt that are s...
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Hungover again Tequila and a lawn dart I throw them both up
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But it is better to have virtue and integrity. I sense what you were trying to do with the quote, but if you follow it's logic through it falls part. Its like you are saying that if you don't compromise, you can do no wrong. Yet people do un-virtuous things all of the time whle simultaneously being true to themselves or having integrity.
Hmmmm. I can kind of hear the rythyms here as a hair band style rock and roll song. Sometimes the pattern of words seems to break up, which throws off the lyrical quality of the message, but a good singer can manipulate the syllables so that it sounds better. I don't know if that is your plan or not. The message you are trying to deliver though is an overused metaphor. SUV's symbolizing greed and our reason for going to war. The problem with that is that it is not a very unique way of looking...
Well a big fat karma bonus for realizing that haiku's don't have to all be 3 lines long. You make some beginner mistakes though. "I am no more a..........menace to...." Just because you have syllable constraints doesn't means it's okay to end a line mid sentence. The entire reason for following the 5 7 5 formula is to force more creative wording by limiting your choices. You have to work within those rules while still trying to express your meaning. It may not be easy that way but your finish...
That's one way of putting it but spin is fun. shining scalp below shag rug flapping in the breeze the words come "your fired" That's how I would have done it. Sometimes it's fun not to be so literal.
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