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LOC: Gaithersburg, MD
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 21
LOC: Gaithersburg, MD
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 21
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tonight was a bittersweet intoxication, a grand enigma of scattered pasts and vaporious futures all condensing onto a gnareled rollercoaster fueled by emotion running towards a tomorrow written year ago upon our hearts.
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Avatar of darkness my chaos sublime constantly twisting through the planes A welcome guide Yet a nemisis to their "lord" Hell is my future, and so I warn others. They know from me who knows. My curse of eternity to corrupt this decaying world.
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those chains that hold you back lay unbound dont you know there is no end I just care cause all I see you holding is hope your last shred among the shadows your last fighting chance I run to the end of the tunnel, I scream, hopeing you'll follow I've chased you, my love to the end of the world...but have I brought you back?
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I want to give you all you deserve before you know you need it. I want to help you view the world, so you can truely see it. I want to help you listen, so you can hear the beauty of it all. I want to be there to pick you up, even before you fall. I want to dry away your tears, before they well up in your eyes. I want to help you understand so you'll never have a bad surpirse. I want to protect you from the world, so you'll never be abused. I want to help explain it all, so you won't get so co...
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All is fair in love and war, and sometimes love is war.
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you need to spell check and grammar check, you should probly print it out and have someone go through it and proof it for such, there's too much for me to go through on here. I don't really think that a 10 year old can really fall in love, esp with someone more than twice his age. most kids are somewhat intimidated by their teachers, and very few teachers would reciprocate such feelings if they were shown by the kids either. If it was a little later in life, maybe, but even so the teacher mos...
this piesc is truely a master piece. it brought back all the fun i had at the park as a kid, and all the late nights hanging out with my friends as a teen. thank you for this wonderfull trip down through the past. keep up the great writting.
this piece makes me wonder a little about your backround. I like it a lot, it just sounds very spell like. I also like how you include the wiccan/pagan tool of the trade in the poem as well.
the rating should be 10+++. Wow words cannot exspress the pain this made me feel just reading it. It felt as though my soul were being shreded by the weapons of every war across the ages. I think that you have truely out done your self here.
I loved reading this poem. It feels like the narrator is lost in the wanting of someone/something thats not there, yet a dark and depressing as it sounds you have woven a single thread of hope through the whole piece. Absolutly wonderful.
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