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LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 14
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 14
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A heavy mix of smoke and perfume pervade my senses hardcore rhythms sear through my brain I strive to hear my thoughts deafening A sip of beer My eyes scan the room looking for your aura waiting wanting I see you silhouetted in the strobe light laughing You entertain your entourage beautiful people serving your need attending your whim A royal decree is sent ter highness commands The DJ bows to your majesty “Your anthem Ma’am” The lights follow you across the dance floor anticipating your mov...
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If you‘re heart ever pounded like a thousand timpani shout out if you died in the moment of kissing her lips shout out if you cried with no pain, screamed with no sound, fell on your knees in despair shout out I can help you I can tell you you were in love.
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I am Dijon mustard I don't go well with custard I'm good on ham Or maybe Spam But best on a nice roast Bustard.
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I'm dying, I can see you crying, But you ain't trying ..hard enough. You're full of good intentions ..with nothing at the end. While I thirst, ..you drink champagne, While you pontificate, ..I see no gain, And while you procrastinate, ..I feel the pain. I'm dying.
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I don't need no teacher nor tutor I am the way of the future Just feed me some crap And I'll spew you some back That's right, I'm your expensive computer
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The Untimely Murder of Thirteen Interns at the Undersized Hands of Someone Who Resembled Dr. Edel...
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You started almost poetically and I soon got into the imagery and irony. I couldn't though make my mind up about the era so I got conflicting pictures. On the one hand the enemy had wooden drums but your soldiers had steel armour (circa 1879?). That was a by and by though and overall it got me wanting more.
I've viewed a few of your works but been unable to hit the save button. You are quite surreal and I think quite talented.
Poetry is a great release for those hard-to-bare memories and helps you come to terms with lots of issues.....you do it well. Good luck. :)
A poem about paternity is different and you do it eloquently. "parachuted from your momma"?...well that's one way of describing it! :)
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