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7 Reviews
3 Comments
Obituary: died from explosion of creativity.
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10 Reviews
5 Comments
Have you ever loved someone so much that it hurt? It's the kind of love that makes you feel nauseous, all the time, especially when you realize you've been thinking about that person for over an hour. Then when you're around that person, you always manage to be nonchalant about everything: No, I don't care if you want me to stay. Do you want me to stay? No, I don't mind running extra errands with you. Do you mind? Sure, it's fine if we go bungee jumping off a cliff. I've got nothing better t...
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20 Reviews
6 Comments
Inspiration, action, addiction; lather, rinse, repeat.
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10 Reviews
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What was it like to have to fight such a powerful disease? To be on the brink, to swim or to sink, to feel one final breeze. Kept alive by machines, you know what it means to have to stand on the edge. Whether or not you wanted that spot, you were forced onto a ledge. I can surely relate to that dreadful fate, but you were taken away. So now here I suffer, pushed to be tougher, and all I can do is pray. You see me still here, shaking in fear; you know I can't do this alone. Could you do me a ...
Version 2
6 Reviews
0 Comments
What was it like to have to fight such a powerful disease? To be on the brink, to swim or to sink, to feel one final breeze. Kept alive by machines, you know what it means to have to stand on the edge. Whether or not you wanted that spot, you were forced onto a ledge. I can surely relate to that dreadful fate, but you were taken away. So now here I suffer, pushed to be tougher, and all I can do is pray. You see me still here, shaking in fear; you know I can't do this alone. Could you do me a ...
Version 1
10 Reviews
0 Comments
1 She opened the door to her room, a cluttered mess, with piles of dirty clothes and old magazines on the floor. She kicked a stack of antique books over on the way to her bed, but luck would have it that she had kicked it just right so that her little toe bent backward. She yelped as she hobbled over to her bed. "Dangit! Just what I needed", she muttered as she examined the wound. It was nothing more than a temporary sprain, but it would be sore the rest of the day, no doubt. This pain would...
Version 2
20 Reviews
1 Comment
She can’t escape from you: when she’s awake you creep deep into her thoughts and make her weep, and it’s for you her heart aches when she’s asleep. She imagines “what if...” what if she gives it a try? what if she gives up on how far she’s come? what if she does it...but what if she cries? what if she gets hurt? what if it’s fun? She overanalyzes about what could have gone wrong; was it that sunny day at the park? or was it that foggy evening on the boardwalk? could it have been when you made...
Version 1
16 Reviews
3 Comments
She can’t escape from you: when she’s awake you creep deep into her thoughts and make her weep, and it’s for you her heart aches when she’s asleep. She imagines “what if...” what if she gives it a try? what if she does it...but what if she cries? what if she gives up on how far she’s come? what if she gets hurt? what if it’s fun? She overanalyzes about what could have gone wrong; was it that sunny day at the park? or was it that foggy evening on the boardwalk? could it have been when you made...
Version 4
17 Reviews
3 Comments
You are the one I will never grow weary of; you could be the most vexatious, aggravating person in the world, but I would sit and listen to your every word with enthusiasm. I will morph our bodies into one, so that I can read your every thought, feel the emotions that you behold, and our hearts beat as one. I can now feel your suffering so intensely that the worst migraine takes over my body and swallows me whole, spitting me out only when I am able to open you up and remove your pain, piece ...
Version 3
6 Reviews
1 Comment
You are the one I will never grow weary of; you could be the most vexatious person in the world, and I would sit and listen to every little thing you say with enthusiasm. You can be my sculptor: chisel away my imperfections, make me perfect for you, and I will change anything you tell me to, just because you are that great an artist. I will then morph our bodies into one, so that I can read your every thought, feel the emotions that you behold, and our hearts beat as one. I can now feel your ...
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