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AGE: 22
LOC: Fabens, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 30

I like words. I like the meanings that they create together and the histories behind them. I like to make up words, on occasion, as it suits me. I like being alive and I like trying to make something of being alive. I like being inspired, and I change my perspective as often as I can so that I can be inspired by as wide a variety of things as possible. I like alot of things, probably everything. But just for the sake of summing it up- I like to write.  

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Poetry / Even Glow, Even Far
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I gave, but sinned, for I wanted to hold and compassion is not ever hardly passion- Never.   I sinned, for I couldn't hold what held me and even now, I cannot ever hold this circle that brings its light to me. I bow and cringe, hiding  from the light. I beg of it, breathing close and hard and compressed- I beg you- don't forgive what I have done, but rather, exile me to the land of unlight, because I don't want to see the heart's blood cup and pool at your palms. Dear...
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Poetry / Unconditional
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There is so much that I will never understand how can I even begin to paint your hands?
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Poetry / The Way of the Wood
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beneath the skin of cloud it spreads out all of its bones and each time the earth smiles it quietly unfolds every one of its secret feathers, each shining in its own green flourescence as it is poured to breath by the sun   how does this frail thing, a lonely wish against the ache of the world how does it thrive without much sustenance other than the hope of patience and humility? what is it that gives this deeply mortal being such hallowed eternity that even the thought of doom cannot d...
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Poetry / My Lady
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She walks in the goldest grain where wild dragonsnaps purple grow where pumpkins pregnant from rain sit uncut, waiting while time's slow   She is mother, see her cheek soft and calm, silently read her page She's maiden too, see her speak, quick, before she slurs in old age   She is all ages and she has many more than one face
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Poetry / Mirage (is not all as it seems)
by Meshek
I am not sure what direction you are going with the lines: then you will/is not a mirage/is solid. The rest of the poem is clear and and flows into itself, but those three lines are a bit confusing. Do you mean that the reader will believe, or that they will see what you see? And do you mean its not a mirage/its solid? But, good poem and I like the theme- sort of a theme about faith and open-mindedness. A good take on it.
Poetry / Dare alla Luce
by quinn363
This has fantastic potential. I think I know what it is about, but I have to admit that it is only because I think that Erin told me about this poem. But still, the poem resonates with me also, because I have felt the same. The poem is so good, I can't even tell you. Even if you don't know what it is about, it is brilliant and speaks to the human experience in a profound way. There are lines in it that will stick with me for awhile, and define feelings that I have not been able to define befo...
Poetry / Loving Never More
by intimate_le
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Poetry / Pinus Timbre
by Johnsienoel
I love your style. Its so romantic (by that I mean it feels as if a Romantic or Modern Romantic poet wrote it). That doesn't mean that it feels outdated, however. I love the theme and the feeling of the poem, and the imagery that you use. I have one criticism- you say in your notes for the reviewer that the inspiration for the poem was a Russian lumberjack and his love for his work, but I don't get that just from reading the poem. I don't see any of his feelings towards his work in the poem.....
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Short Story / A Man and his Island:
by oknapp
This story is truly a diamond in the rough. Your talent and the clear brilliance of the idea and the description is clear, but the story as a whole needs some cleaning up. There are some grammar problems, such as misspelled words and places where a comma should be or a sentence should end. I think that those things really distract from the beautiful, clear, and candid yet emotional tone. You should go through this story and find all of those little mistakes, and after you go through it, you s...
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