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AGE:
23
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 28
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 28
Little old me? Why would you be interested in such a thing? Oh well, if you insist.
My name is Anna. I am in my Third Year at Leeds University studying Theology and Religious Studies (no I don’t want to be a Nun, although, as things are going at least it is an option; career ideas are not my strong point.) I say this, but I am in fact the worst (read “laziest”) student in the world and always leave my essays to the last minute and definitely don’t read enough books.
I am a Leeds United fan. To quote my old Head of Sixth Form “for my sins.”
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Ethan sighed. He hated the way they fought. The way they became flawed and he had to create new ones. Which in turn led to them arguing with each other over superiority and importance. But he saw no way round it. While he was able to control so many parts of their life, for some reason, he could not prevent this. It was like some glitch, a bug. He had to create more in order to expand and make things more interesting, yet doing this led to internal destruction. Why could they not be peaceful?...
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As each day passes, Bringing with it a new. The memories are fading, What am I to do? I cling to them tightly, I don’t want to forget. The places I’ve been to, The people I’ve met.
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Ethan sighed. He hated the way they fought. The way they became flawed and he had to create new ones. Which in turn led to them arguing with each other over superiority and importance. But he saw no way round it. While he was able to control so many parts of their life, for some reason, he could not prevent this. It was like some glitch, a bug. He had to create more in order to expand and make things more interesting, yet doing this led to internal destruction. Why could they not be peaceful?...
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I’ve got this aching feeling, Right here, in my heart. My eyes are welling up, Coz I can’t bear to be apart, From you. You’ve made my life worth living, And can always make me grin. You’ve told your stories now just listen, This message comes from deep within. I’m really gonna miss ya, And your crazy little ways. The love, the help and joy So many stories in your life, Yet you’re like a kid with a new toy. You’ve helped me grow to who I am, And I’ll be eternally grateful. I’ve hope I’ve given...
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Get well soon Hamster. The world still needs your smile. The world still needs your fun. It still needs its diamond. However small it comes.
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Very nice, flows very well and isn't at all vague (I do like to actually know what a poem was talking about when I get to the end of it!) I am making an assumption that the lack of punctuation, and the lack of structure is an intended thing, as a visual image of what the words are telling the reader. If not intended, well I think it does that, so well done to your subconcious!
I got two thirds of the way through this before I stopped, I'm really not sure where it is going, and while I am mildly interested I'm not that interested. I suspect this is more because I'm English, and don't connect easily with many of the similies, because I actually would rank myself among said geeks, if I was totally honest. I didn't find it very amusing, but again this could be due to cultural differences. But the style and idea is a good one, and I can't find anything wrong technically.
ha ha. well you certainly get your point across concisely! i do like people who don't mess around. not much to criticise really, agreed it is not the strict form of haiku, but it works well for me.
I like the story this tells. I particularly like the imagery in the opening three lines, and the 'never going weary...' couplet. I would work on the rhythm, I think it could probably flow a lot better than it does currently. Definitely something worth working on I feel.
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