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AGE: 21
LOC: LA, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 09

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Late night i hear your voice getting weak But you don't want me to let you go to sleep. It's amazing how you keep me coming back for more. Got me feeling like a million bucks, even though i'm poor. Might as well change the stars to love. Cause were on a one way street with no speed bumps. It's like there's no axis road at this pace. Just smooth 65 over to her place. Maybe one day when i get to where i want to be. She'll be standing right there next to me. Holding hands we'd walk, with our fee...
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Poetry / Miracles
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A miracle is when you took a chance on a guy who wasn't ready to romance and got him to. How i can't close my eyes without seeing yours and reaching out to nobody wishing you were there. When every time a song comes on i think of how you use to look when you danced to it. Somethings come and go and never return... A miracle is how you have never left my side, and how you are ready to come back inside.
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Sometimes I wake up and wish the rain just kept going. That the sun never came up, and the moon just kept glowing. Breakfast was always on the table. And the sheets never wrinkled. That each day that comes didn't bring me closer to death. But I could rewind time without breaking a sweat. My life took a left turn when I decided to drop out. And that girl that it was for well let's just say I did love her without a doubt. I want the sun to come out now I've been living in the dark for too long....
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Dear Kid. There is no in the event of my demise, I'm going to be here no matter what the case. I just pray you have your mother's eyes. And you take life at your father's pace. I promise you though; there will never be any goodbyes. Just so longs and see you laters. Your first day of school, your mother will cry. I'll shed a tear when I watch you on stage at the Christmas plays. The love I'll have for you will never die. Late at night I'll go in your room just to watch you sleep. *sigh* smile...
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Short Story / FOMA
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Poetry / STRESSFUL PAIN
I liked how you stayed on the rhyme patter, but sometimes switching it up is alright. It kinda reminded me of some old rap lyrics. Maybe taking a stab at writing a song is a good idea.
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Poetry / Treatment
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