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AGE: 30
LOC: SF, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 18

I’m a poet at heart, but I also write fiction and non-fiction. I finished the first draft of my novel “The End of the Beginning” last year and am taking a break before I get back to it. Meanwhile, I am sorting through my ideas for my second novel, writing poetry, as well as attempting my very first play!

I received my MFA in Writing from the University of San Francisco.

See more of my writings at:
http://allthefleetingmuses.blogspot.com

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Non-fiction / The Blake Paradox
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A few years ago, to get out of work for a couple of days, I told a lie. Sure, that’s how it’s done. You say you’re not feeling well, your basement flooded, your car broke down, there’s been a family emergency. Some even say there’s been a death in the family. I went one step further. I called my manager one morning, sobbed into the phone and said, “My best friend, Blake, got into an accident last night and died. I’ve been at the hospital all night.” Two days later, when I finally went back to...
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A few nights ago, my friend and I went to see a movie called, "2 Days in Paris." It was directed/produced by Julie Delpy who was also in the "Before Sunrise" and "Before Sunset" movies. We figured it would be somewhat similar and since we had both liked those two movies, we were excited to see this one. It turned out to be entirely different from the other two (which were directed by Richard Linklater, who also did "Waking Life" and "A Scanner Darkly"), the only similarity being they all took...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Acquisitions Suck!
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My company, a once-prestigious architecture firm, one of the largest in Northern California, owned by three-time president of AIA, Gordon Chong, is getting bought out by Stantec, a Canadian engineering giant, and will cease to exist as of Monday. We are not happy. Suddenly, we have dress codes (my miniskirts and I were frowned upon this past week when their HR was visiting us), there are rules as to what we can swap over e-mail (apparently not drawings of urinating penises, and certainly not ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Boxes, Boxes, Everywhere!
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So, I recently had two new roommates move in. Two chicks. It's been a long time since I've lived with girls. It's not as bad as a I thought it could be. Just that I realized that sometimes guys, who are notorious for not being clean and tidy (sorry, guys), can be cleaner and tidier than women. The girls have now been here for two months, but neither seem to be a big fan of unpacking their boxes or cleaning, and our place still looks like they JUST moved in. I guess it's partly my own fault, b...
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Poetry / Again
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Again The disheveled folds of last night Unmade bed and exhausted pillows Smell of you In the rumpled sheets And A dip of longing Where you had lain
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Graveyard Shift
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Poetry / Alone
This has a very watery feel to it. Of course, the melancholy is evident in the sky crying and the "lonely, gray tomorrow", but at the same time, evokes the sense of tears. I like the idea/use of "wake"- which could mean trail, path, presence... but also a funeral. I'm not sure how i feel about the rain staining the ground- because a) it doesn't really stain the ground, it wets it, leaves its mar and b) well... something about that verse is too sterile. Like you're being too careful. Open up w...
Quotes / Your problem
Funny. It reflects back on the author being able to laugh at him/herself and not being entirely bitter about not always getting to hear what he/she wanted to hear. Sometimes we just want praise. Sometime we get the exact opposite.
Humor/Satire / The Giant Urbis Ego Trip
I noticed the hkh and sng repetitions in the two stanzas (is it intentional?) I also noticed your abc abc pattern. Not sure what hot rat means. This is funny. I do like the witticism in the last stanza- the "and watch for pink/to see if it's enough." Do you really think everyone is that bad?
Criticism / qwe
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