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AGE: 53
LOC: Port Orchard, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 28

I have been writing stories, poetry and scripts since I was a lot younger than I am now.I enjoy writing and feel what I write with my muse.

Life is a journey and along the way you will touch the lives of many people. And in remembering those people you will realize how much they have touched your life.  Live well and dance as if no one is watching….......

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Darkness descends and I sit here writing. One begins to wonder what centuries of surviving has to do with anything. People come and go, friends you make one day are soon dead in their graves in a short span of time that all take for granted. Families are changed and their lives marked by everyone that touches their lives in some way or another. I wonder if those whose lives I have come in contact with are better for it. The pages I sit here and write are for my peace of mind. And I know that...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Magic of Tulox'ena
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Shadows dance in the dawn, giving way to the mist of morning. And the Sun, knowing no difference, shines gold beams down. Bringing light to the darkness, sending sister Moon home because now it’s his turn to guide the world beneath his gaze. Warmth spreads over the land like a blanket. Awakening the land to move and life begins anew. A new day, a new beginning. “Ah, hell. I don’t like it.” The sound of paper ripping fills the air of a small room. Along with it getting crumpled and then thrown...
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It was great. The matching of the alphabet with the people in the story added to the A-Z story book. It would and will be great with artwork to match.Definetly a book I would buy for a 3-4th grade reader.
Children's / Butterfly, Butterfly
It made me visualize the butterfly with all the questions that float through my childhood memories. I really enjoyed it...light hearted and made me smile.
Action Adventure / The Genre Trials… #1: Action
Hmmm..sorta lost me with the lengthy words that will need a dictionary to decifer and then to put the "true" word in place of, to make more sense to the average joe. You did jump right into the action part of the writing, loosing some sense of what the heck just happened. I find that I have to read it more than once to get a full feeling of what you are writing. But keep trying, Rome wasn't built in a day.
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I am happy you put the comment that you are only 14 yrs old and that said a lot about this romantic story. I would say it has a potential of being a good short story. I can see where you are trying to go with it. Mary is trying to find out about kisses and how each one means a different thing. It tells me she is also trying to find that special kiss that means "forever". Keep tweaking it, it does need some rewriting but don't loose the concept. In fact read it out loud and you can readily ide...
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True when you look at it from the gravity's point of view. :LOL: not bad not bad
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