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AGE: 23
LOC: Lakewood, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 26

Who am I?  A question so many writers before me and “my time” have answered it’s almost an intimidating mockery of their past works defining who “I” am.  Nevertheless, here’s a bare-bones run through of what I’ve gathered so far.  I’ve been writing since I was around 14, yes deep thoughts about gradeschool feelings then, I should hope to think my writing’s grown and evolved similar to myself because I tend to imagine me as a rare, unique and utterly ridiculous individual whose hopelessly in love with the little things in life that make you squint your eyes and tilt your head.  ”live for the day” but while your at it, plan a vacation.  Can’t work on dying your whole life without a little break to stop and check the scenery.  Cheers friend…

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Novel Treatments / Am I Ready To Publish My Fiction
by JayG
Brilliant. As a mostly new writer of sorts I'm becoming fully aware that what I'm writing, in fact, stinks. Not because the stories are lacking or the ideas for characters are unimaginative. It's because, as you've said, it's not a matter of having the perfect story in hand, it's a matter of delivering that perfect story in a way that everyone else, including yourself, can understand and relate to. Ultimately I find alot of the negative comments left for any particular piece lies in the revie...
Novel Treatments / D:RJGSEnkdlmfngaeljklkaKMASlks
by Benedetto
I have to say, it started off very abstract, in an artistic sense it seemed like it could have really ended up going somewhere. The further I read into it, the more confusing it became and the more like an endless orgy of letters and garbled text it became. I can't really begin to imagine what it is you were going for there, it started off semi-reminiscent of a poem put into paragraphs but ended chaotically messy. If you were, in fact, going for anything at all I would suggest to re-evaluate ...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Sentinel (Prologue)
by Aeryn
Alright, to start, I did like where the story seemed to be going. But the biggest problem was just that, I wasn't entirely sure where it was going exactly. Your descriptions are excellent, the similes you create are an amazing element to your writing that captures what is going on. But it seems, at least to me, you are peppering the page more with similes and cute phrases of what the scene is like as opposed to what is beginning to happen. Also, the other problem being the piece seems to have...
Novel Treatments / Work In Progress (Beautiful...)
by ghost
Alright, to start, break up your sentences. Paragraphs, set dialog apart so that it stands out from the rest of the story itself. All of the informed jam packed in so closely really made it a hard read just from a literal sense disregarding the writing itself. Not word said to him about anything other than work the rest of the morning. This is just a quick example of some of the oversights I noticed with the writing as well. A lot of common errors and grammar slips throughout. Try to make sur...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Town Stories part Two
by Mario007
An interesting story to say the least. I liked the idea behind it a lot and the story flowed from beginning to end. There were however a few hiccups that stopped it just shy from being as good as it could have. "One day she was stealing and had to be unnoticed, and the next day and when she had to return everything, she still had to stay unnoticed." There were several occurrences of this type of text going on throughout. It's relatively mixed up and confusing. perhaps you could just say: "One...
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