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AGE: 18
LOC: Albuquerque, NM
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 15

well i love music dislike posers and well i write i hope your criticism is helpful

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Short Story / Lovely Liar Part 1
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Part 1 As I walk down the hall I hear the rude whispers of veronica and Anna. As you can tell I’m not one of the popular girls. I’m the outcast of all outcasts. I go to Sandia Prepatory Academy, the preppiest school in Albuquerque. I’m the only Goth kid in the whole place. I’m not depressed I just really dislike these people I hate to blend in there. My parents died when I was fourteen. You can’t even imagine how depressed I was. I needed my parents so much. It sucked I lost all my friends wh...
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Poetry / Nothingness
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Nothingness Silence Silent yells Silence echoes As life goes on No one hears the pain and misery Of a silent night
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Poetry / I am Free
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I am free I hate you you’re my obsession. The day you don’t cross my mind for one second is the day I am free. Free of you and your rein over me. Is gone you have been overthrown. In my mind I am free. You have ruined my life once. Don’t think you’ll have the chance to do it again. I have freed myself. It looks like your dictatorship of my mind is over. So you Hitler are gone. I hope your butler burned your body to a crisp. By Legacy
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Poetry / Go, Figure!
i really liked it i guess because i know what the feeling is like this was a great poem i have nothing to critique i leave the grammar to an editor i dont pay attention to that but the writing the meaning was great keep writing your good
overall this was great deep i could really see where your coming from the second to last line was what pulled it all together then the last sentence you could feel it just fade and your left thinking wow
Lyrics / New Lyrics
that was gruesome in a good way you knowif that makes sense it would make a great song i see where all of it comes together
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Poetry / It
it is very good very simple and the ending is strong and memorable