Liasonwithtragedy's profile

I would like to a have a vulgon war, how do we go about that?

I feel you. I been there recently, so this poem touches a nerve with me. I think we all experience that internal conflict at some point in our lives. I like the fact that your taking from your own life and thoughts instead of conjuring something from thin air; it always make the work more powerful, be it poetry or prose. I have a problem with your style though, it is too generic, their is nothing special about it. I want to read your work and know only you could have wrote it that way, you ge...

This poem deals with the eternal dilemma of the older generation expressing their dislikes towards the following generation. I would like to know if you are dedicating or aiming this at someone in particular. I'm curious so let me know. My problem with this piece is that you don't elaborate on why you feel the "young" crowd of this generation has lost its way. I wish you would complain a little less and prove a little more, I just want to hear your reasons; it doesn't have to be scientific fa...

This is a strong poem. I like the passion the seeps from your words. The imagery you use is original and your own. good job.

I like the insight you provide into the narrators life. You do a fine job in bringing the reader in slowly. I must say that I was pleasently surprise to see that this was not your typical "Christmas" poem. Your onto something, keep the good writing up.