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AGE: 16
LOC: Detroit, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 22

Hmm, what to say, what to say?
You see almost everyone saying that on their profile nowadays.
Yet, here I am, complaining about it, and nothing to say.

Well, hi. How’s it goin’? Great.

I love to write. Most of the time I can’t seem to finish my stories…
sometimes.
Well, that’s it. I deleted “The Unknown” series.
Please don’t ask why, it was just getting on my nerves.

I might start (and possibly finish) a new series. Keep looking!

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Consequences unheard of become too real.
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Love once given... was never returned.
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Poetry / Love's Tears
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_Those who choose to love know what it's like._ An overwhelming feeling of dread comes over you when he leaves and you're alone again. There's an unforgivable envy when you know he's with someone else, and it shows. You have an undelightful feeling in the pit of your stomach when you sense he's not well, when he speaks, you can tell. The dryest tear goes down your face when it starts to rain, because you can feel his pain. Another day goes by unlived when you stare at a picture of him, then y...
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It was only a week or so later that our paths had finally crossed again. He had quit working at the restaurant a couple days after our startling exchange of looks. But he'd come back, this time not working, but looking at the menu. Since he quit, and there was no one to come in and replace him, I'd been demoted. But I didn't mind, I guess, as long as I was getting a check at the end of every week. He looked smug yet sort of morose, staring at the menu like he didn't know what was on it alrea...
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It wasn't the first time I'd seen him, but tonight, it surely felt like it. The moonlight made him entirely different from his formerly angelic look. Now he was extremely radiant, striking, stunning. Wouldn't you expect something like this? A teenage girl who dreams of herself and that one guy, the one man that lights up her utter darkness, together. One of those small paperbacks that ends with a happily ever after and a kiss, most likely a romantic one. Nah, this wasn't of that classificati...
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Poetry / Jade
This is an excellent piece. I've no suggestions because it's flawless to me. I'm still searching for the true meaning of the "sea glass", and why he crumbled the glass in his palm...but that's probably only because I'm only adolescent. You should publish your poetry.
Quotes / six words
Interesting but not so new. Describes what a lot of people feel like. I feel like you could have reached further and described this feeling in a different way. But I'm only so young so maybe I am unable to process a deeper meaning. I'm sure you are full of talent.! Lu2L
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Short Story / Between Love And Hate
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Young Adult / Beauty and Betrayal
First of all, sorry for taking so long to review your work. Before I even started reading the story, I read the notes and I have to say that I am _extremely_ overjoyed to hear that this story is based off of the biblical story of Esther. It's my favorite Bible story and I've always loved to hear it. The story itself is fine, though this part is so short, I want to read more. I've found no errors to especially note, nothing seems grammatically incorrect. I understand everything just fine. As f...
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Short Story / So We Write...
Poetry / Love's Tears

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