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AGE: 35
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 25

M. Lori Motley (MMWyrm) is a fantasy and horror fiction writer who dabbles in articles (about fantasy and horror fiction writing) when the mood strikes.

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Haiku/Senryu / Home Again
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Mossy gate opens Ma calls the house to supper Tripping on childhood
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Flash Fiction / Homecoming
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He eased open the back door, grimacing with the attempt to wish away the usual squeal of the lower-middle-class door hinges. He had spent two hours in a seedy pub to delay his homecoming until after Patty would be asleep. She always wanted to chatter at him when he came home from a business trip. Jeff was too tired from traveling all night, the two beers at the bar,and of her. Illuminated only by the green LED display on the microwave, the kitchen and house beyond, were silent. Jeff sighed wi...
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Flash Fiction / Worship
Ugh! He thinks his parents are vampires? Or just some insane religious punishment thing... ugh. You drabble well, but there are a few thing I notice that could be changed to be more concise. I believe the point of drabble is to get as much story into the 100 words as possible. Some examples: "Religion was ingrained into Harold." This is a declarative sentence (telling) that turns super obvious once you continue on about the grandparents, the shrine, the whip of penance. You could easily delet...
Short Story / Three Misapprehensions
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Short Story / Her Eyes
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Haiku/Senryu / Scavenger's
Structurally wonderful, aurally pleasing, and without error. The meaning keeps bouncing back and forth in my head and I'm not sure if I'm getting the same thing you intended. My first thought was of a crime scene - perhaps a young woman tossed into a ravine by a ravenous scavenger of innocence - that type of thing. But that's hardly a victimless crime, is it? Perhaps a more literal translation of this verse. :)
Non-fiction / Tiger Tricks
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