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LOC: Queens Village, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 03
LOC: Queens Village, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 03
Malta salta apreciates all genuine attempts at friendly connections, constructive critisism and creative pow-wows which in turn will be likewise reciprocated…
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This was her pretending to be that which is not cracking the paint on the walls. And she don’t wanna apply the breaks. Wants go as fast as you can take her cos your words are like a strong breeze, ill wind to pass right through her. Gonna bring some change to me and you in the twinkle of a Flames flicker from inside her thighs, she’s breathing fire tonight as she deep throats the roots again in octaves higher than you and I have ever heard. Tinsel draped over high breasts “b...
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SEX I think about it but I’m not sure that the aura is enticing anyone because I’m still without the placard that shows people I’ve had any, you know, that big smile on your body that only lasts a couple of hours, or, at least till the phone stops ringing and anything after that is just desperation. MONEY I think about it but I’m not sure that the aura is enticing any because I’m still without the placard that shows people I’ve gotten any, you know, that b...
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middle man who discovered the hollowed out valves which expelled the stale air from within the empty heart. When word got around, many came to see if this was true. Many just like me and you. And vagrants of all sorts holed up in there, and animals sought shelter there, and words found refuge there, and ideas etched themselves in there, and evil found a spot in there, and goodness claimed a space in there, and when he looked, the heart was full of all these things. The middle man smiled, seal...
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Peter’s hands were moist. The way they sort of skidded unevenly as they made their way down the contour of my hips was really no big thing. And when he kissed me, it was no big thing either. His tongue was wild. He was a horrible kisser so I tried to slow him down. “Peter, do it like this…” and I opened my mouth slightly to kiss him when this tiny hiss began to crawl from his throat, transforming itself into frenzied energy. It had emanated fr...
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Pray. He is the spot on the horizon meant to make you wonder. He is the echo that reminds you just how lonely you really are. But I want more. Prey. He is more than lips and hands and torture and scent and moisture and thrust and, and he's got a soul apparently. But I want more.
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I'd like to start by saying that after reading this one chapter I am completly hooked! I was instantly immersed in this world that was incredibly vivid. It's gritty, frightening in it's honesty, and very addictive! There was a sentence that I felt could have been worded differently just to make your point clearer to the reader: "But by then–even if their intelligence was incorrect, even if the farmhouse did not house the partisans they sought–still it housed the partisans they sought." (2) So...
You remind me of a subtle Charles Bukowski (and you're under 18!!). Favorite line(s): "my stride has been/Reduced from a bouyant expression of youth, to a shuffle/Of defeat, which I employ now to get me from Al's Tavern/To Bret's Bar and Grill". How heart breaking and comical (in a dark sort of way), all at once. I can really envision the bar scene: the sense of loneliness as the narrator sits amongst his/her fellow anonymous alcoholics who seem to be going through something similar. I also l...
Sounds like a dead person trying desperatley to re-trace their last steps. To make sense of what happened to them. I'm curious to know if the lines that are crossed out are done so on purpose? I think it makes it all the more interesting. As if you're in the mind of the speaker and they are thinking, re-playing, analyzing and re-analzying their last day. Like mental notes; the least plausible ideas get crossed out and reasonable ideas don't.
"if only people remained sain, maybe there would be less pain". Although the speaker seems to have lost faith in life, I think he/she is more optimistic than they believe themselves to be. I don't know if sanity equals less pain, but it's an interesting thought. I also enjoyed the line, "denial sets in and optimistic people turn to lust to fill in the feelings they lost". How true and insightful!!!
Hmm.....I guess the speaker is realizing that there is no escaping the inevitable end of the human body and yet there are things which seem to have no end. For example "That alters between us dolls/Each of us see different walls/while death we stall", could be the speakers way of saying that he/she is constantly making excuses which change (this could be represented by the different walls). Excuses that attempt to hide his/her fear of mortality ("while death we stall"). I also found the last ...
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