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AGE: 16
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 14

Name ;; Marina
Age ;; 15

I love to write. Poetry and short stories and usually what I go for. If you want to chat with me about anything then hit me up. :]

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AIM ;; MarinaMassacre
MSN ;; Marina_Massacre@hotmail.com
Myspace ;; Myspace.com/Snoopy14411

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Poetry / The Mighty
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Lo and behold How the mighty have fallen Missing their chance Missing their calling And the time slips past her fingertips Contented The hot tea on her lap She sips Gazing out to those Who fell and rose From desolate alleyways To their residential homes She watches Those little residential drones Play the government game With government rule The loser a shame Government to blame.
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Poetry / Once, Twice
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Eleven men firing eleven guns for a minute Is a lifetime, Ten minutes Is an eternity, It took that And longer To cut down those eleven victims. The bullets began to slow, Smoke began to lift. Several of the men, Vomiting and coughing on acrid smoke. The clouds of death departed, Revealing him. He walked above the dead, Peered down through the dimmest of life, At the young Heir. Moving, Still treading life, Moaning and writhing, He clutched his father by the sleeve. Lowering his gun, He placed...
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The Tattoo Artist Come to his chair and sit The artist is waiting. With a vision in mind And needle in hand He begins his masterpiece. And as the needle works its wonders Driven by skillful hand He leaves his mark His art Upon their skins Unlike the pieces That hang in the museum His art lives Thrives On their flesh Never to be overlooked Or forgotten And his finished design A sight to behold
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Short Story / Little Amelia
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Once upon a time there was a little girl. About nine years old. Her name was Amelia and she was convinced that she was not loved. Little Amelia had a Mother and Father like any other little girl. They bought her nice things and took her places. But they did not love her. She could tell. So little Amelia tried to win their love by being a very good little girl. She brushed her teeth, and went to bed on time and ate all her vegetables. But they did not seem to notice this. They did not seem to...
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Poetry / MY LOVE SONG
Thats beautiful. A bit on the sadder side though. Reminds me of myself when I'm with my boyfriend, the talking away about the day and meaning things part. The last line is the best.
I would have never thought of that. Based on the theory of evolution and the bible, I fused the two to meet my satisfaction. It is quite possible, as you stated, with all the little unknown signs of what may be alien life, it is likely that they may have come down to interact with sub humans maybe even setting the foundations for our technology. They probably don't like to come around anymore since we learned how to make weapons...
Short Story / Reality Check
How very interesting. I'm a great fan of mystery so I love the one line where the son tells his mother not to freak out when she sees him. Although the situation is a bit over used. Stories about good kids gone bad are rather common now a days. I'm hoping you'll continue and put in some kind of twist that will make this unique. Very well written.
The mystery of this story leaves me wanting more. I'm left wondering what your character could have possibly done to send such awful flesh eating demons after him/her. I love how your character wonders what kind of experience he or she will have while being eaten alive. I also like the bit of humor that you threw into it. It is interesting how your character just accepts their oncoming demise. It was a wonderful piece.
Poetry / leave crumbling
Your use of imagery created some excellent pictures in my head. The second stanza was my favorite especially the line about the tension in your heart, I also liked the short rhyme you used. I though it was a wonderful poem. Good work.
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