You did a very good job on this. VERY descriptive and sometimes a little dry humor helped push it along without leaving the feeling of tedium. I enjoyed this and would like to read more of your stories.

this is very well written. You include a lot of details and it flows along very smoothly. Keep up the good work.

This a very touching story. I really enjoyed the pace and how well it flowed. You include a lot of details and it helps push along the story. The story never got tedious and i always wanted to keep going so im goig to review you pretty high for this very good peice of work! good job!

That is indeed one of the longest rhyming pieces i have reviewed. You are deffinently a good writer, while your work is very descriptive and flows very well. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work!

that was very funny. Especially the cricket jumped on the desk when he told a corny joke. Good work

A facsinating work about a surpising and unique idea...pigs. Good job and keep up the good work

you did a very good job infussing imagery into your words.

breathtaking

good work

this was very good. I love reading stories about the military. Good job!