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AGE:
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LOC: Kenosha, WI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 13
LOC: Kenosha, WI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 13
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There have only been three great kisses in the history of mankind thus far. Oh, to be sure, there have been many amazing kisses. The kind of kisses that duels, and yes, even wars are begun over. There have been even a thousand more kisses of the better then good variety, the sort that matrimonial bonds tend to develop around. But yet, there have only been three kisses that have qualified themselves as being great. The first, well, the first could have an entire novel written about it. In fac...
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There have only been three great kisses in the history of mankind thus far. Oh, to be sure, there have been many amazing kisses. The kind of kisses that duels, and yes, even wars are begun over. There have been even a thousand more kisses of the better then good variety, the sort that matrimonial bonds tend to develop around. But yet, there have only been three kisses that have qualified themselves as being great. The first, well, the first could have an entire novel written about it. In fac...
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Three men and a woman sat at a small wooden table. Early morning light spilled through a couple of windows, and a sunroof. "I hate when you host, its always so fucking early," said one of the men who happened to be dressed in a fine suit, rather gruffly. "Language! And its not so bad, he has to host once a day, and at least most of us make it," said the woman as she took a bite out of her stack of pancakes. She was an athletic type, and was wearing a smart red business suit that went well wit...
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Nice ending! Too many too fast needs a comma in it. Too many, too fast. Otherwise, it looks pretty good to me, grammar-wise.
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