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AGE:
24
LOC: Fairfield, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 31
LOC: Fairfield, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 31
I’m Tres.
But enough about me, let’s talk about you!!
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....okay, I’m just kidding.
I’m a writer born from the dirty, damp south (Tuskegee, AL) and raised all over her voose lagina. From Georgia to California, I’ve pretty much seen and heard it. My experiences helped me write my first book, The Light Flickers Five (coming within a month and a week, I swear). More details at myspace.com/thelightflickersfive.
I’m just here to put up some poetry and short stories and check out the feedback. I have no preconceived notions; people will be people. Thank you for reading.
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A lot happens. A lot Has happened, and before I begin, let me tell you that dying wasn’t all that bad. If you were ever afraid of dying, there's really nothing to worry about unless you drown. Two reasons: You die slow, and asphyxiating hurts like a son of a bitch. If you drown in the ocean, you have to walk your way out of the bottom of a deep, dark blue pit filled with aqueous creatures that can actually sense your presence and can mess with your spirit body. So for me to die in the middle...
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Still yourself, and be quietus. Now, Memory tailors my tongue to traverse this tense of present and present you, thus, with pain. In practice, you played the part of peasant poorly, protecting pieces of personage you thought served well. Sinuous is sin with silence and sorrily you sit and sob, for sorrow, in refuse, will not excuse. Forget, you do, the feeling of failure and folly that follows... How freely you fall, fast and determined to descend to death and destruction. Despite the despise...
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"I love you too baby. I’ll always love you, no matter what. Till’ the end, as long as we both shall live I will only love you." "You’re my sunshine, you know that? I could watch the sunrise, but I’d rather watch you slowly awake from the deepest slumber, inhale your air like sweet morning dew and hold you close, keeping all of your morning glory to myself. You are simply amazing." "You know, I can’t STAND how you always... see, this is what I’m talking about. You ALWAYS do this to me..." And...
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I’d heard people, in my life, describe what I was about to go through. "The Preacher, the Dirt, the End to the hurt, below to the ground you go. No Teacher, no Worse, no Sin to disperse, for nothing is all you’ll know." Having witnessed those angels and demons, I felt my own twist to the tales, but every thought of wanting to share my newfound knowledge fell to ash in my mind. I’m dead. *Dead.* Alley’s betrayal to me put the most bitter thoughts through my spirit, and I didn’t want to even wa...
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I *really* miss the being able to sleep. It would’ve made the long night bearable if, for even a brief moment, I could’ve just nodded off, maybe drifted away to a distant dream where I wasn’t fearing the loss of my soul, or having to deal with strangers I didn’t know. Maybe pretend I was still alive, and that maybe Alley hadn’t lost whatever mind she had left and acted like she used to act. It would have, but the reality was that the creature I had to fend off, I found,was only a small nuisan...
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It sounds like a freestyle (some better said than read) but the rhyme scheme and timing was on point. All caps works usually throw me off (and look like a FWD: kind of message instead of a serious work) but in light of the truth you speak of it's nearly forgiven. Since the piece is so long, you should separate them into parts (five or four) with the lines together and the words correctly capitalized. It helps people reading keep sense of the information given. It's nice to hear something of t...
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