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LAST LOGIN: February 07
LAST LOGIN: February 07
I’m 32 years old. I am very artistic and enjoy creating anything from purses and paintings, to lyrics and poetry. I also enjoy theator.
I’m for the most part optimistic and I try to find the good in everything and everybody.
Love All, Mejasha.
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Don't worry about that. It will be o.k. You won't even remember that someday. Now that, you will, regretfully so. but " why? " is something I still don't know. This here has to happen so that this will too. This person will eventually be nice to you. Some of this gets better as you grow. It gets even better as you learn to flow. I hate to tell you, but this gets worse. It tends to be your lifelong curse. Don't believe her when she tells you that. Don't believe yourself when you think you're f...
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I try to escape the darkness. I can feel it closing in. The light that I try to harness is clouded with the sin. It is not my own that I run from. For this, I'm forgiven, I know. it's the evil in the world that makes my soul hurt so. I used to shelter myself so often so as not to admit defeat. So many people are so different all marching to our own beat. I want to open myself up and absorb them and save them all from what I see. But all I can do is reach out my hand while I am saving me. M. ...
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Secrets create lies to hide themselves. Are they afraid they'll be misunderstood? Secrets get pulled down from thier shelves and get revealed if they're good. Some get put back, for whenever, and would stay there if they could. But secrets cannot hide forever, especially when they should. M.J.S Mejasha
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YOU deserve what YOU desire. follow your dreams to take YOU higher. YOUR destination is already known. the path YOU take is what's unshown. fear is the thing that holds YOU back. confidence is the thing YOU lack. YOU define YOURSELF with the things YOU do. what YOUR searching for is inside YOU.
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I see pieces of me in everything I see. If what I see is true, then I'm pieces of you. When you look around, you is what you've found. You create the new with everything you do. When the puzzle is complete, it's you yourself you'll meet. But we will be there too. We're all pieces of you. Mejasha
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I like it. In reading it I thought for sure you really did get hit with rulers by nuns. I see that you are only 19. They don't do that any more do they? Anyway, excellent imagery. Love All, Mejasha.
I really wanted to give you a higher score but I couldn't on the bases that I did not fully understand the poem. Well, I might have, but I am not sure if I interpreted it right. I love the imagery of this sentence. "I cannot co-operate with this justification of sin, honorable as roaches sailing across astro-glide caked floors." I have definetelly never heard anyone describe something quite like that. That is poetry for you. I am curious as to what this means though. "Mother weeps crustacean ...
It definetely lived up to it's title. I kept waiting for a punch line hoping that it would all be just a joke or something. That's me! I am optimistic that way. The only thing that I would suggest is that you not to repeat yourself in a way when you say;"never to be walked on again never to be lived on again" It seems that it just needs one or the other. Just a thought! Thanks for sharing. Love All, Mejasha
I like your use of words but I think that you should play around with some different formats and maybe punctuation. I know that it is a poem but sometimes it is hard to follow when the form is off. I might have not thought that if you had read it the way you would. But the way it is wrote, I am not sure which words you want emphasis on. Thanks for sharing. Love All, Mejasha
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Wow! It has explicit imagery and makes me think of revelations. It makes me scared and sad at the same time. I like it a lot but I do wish the last line wouldn't throw off the rhyme scheme. I agree with you. The devout are like angels in hell. I just wish there was a way to say that without losing the rhyme. Don't mind me though. Rhyming is my thing. Love All, Mejasha
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