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AGE:
28
LOC: Laurel, MD
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 27
LOC: Laurel, MD
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 27
hello, my name is Melecia Gayle. I am an aspiring writer. My favorite genre is poetry so majority of my writings are in poetry form. I write mostly on Emotions, Love, spirituality and Inspirational topics.But I can tackle any other topics because I am a well rounded poet.lol. My style of writing is a bit different but it is how i express my self.
check out my profile on myspace and let me know what you think.
http://www.myspace.com/love_lyric
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I have a heart of iron, strong enough to give love to one like you. Some one who ends every sentence with a lie. Some one who I thought had a gentle trait was a far cry. Some one who manipulates to get their own way. Some one who breaks a vow to never stray. Some one who hides and lives in secrets, masking their true identity. Some one who says they love me but strikes me down like I’m their enemy. Some one who robs me of my sunshine and bring me nothing but rain. Some one leaves me all...
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lol...this is so adorable and funny! I think you are very talented and I would buy your book when it comes out. Except I was a bit confused by the time line of this poem. you stated "would have brought it months ago, but had to wait till spring" but in the begining it stated "its my turn for show and tell" So is he presently preparing for show and tell? And what was going on months ago that he didnt bring it? why he had to wait till spring? is it now spring in the poem when he is doing his sh...
beautiful words. I can relate to this poem. Some times we wish we could live out all our dreams but it never fully works out the way we want. I like this line..."but give this soul, nothing to hold and so I calmly walk away" Its as if its all meaningless, as if your saying that even though your given wings to fly you never land where you want and you end up with this emptiness still. nice work.
nice piece could use some editing."she is the one i see my dreams" should be "she is the one I see IN my dreams" maybe? other than that I think it is very gripping and intense.
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