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LOC: Oxnard, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 21
LOC: Oxnard, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 21
My poems, I feel, they have been in the process of maturing. I am green. Though I’m old school, practice makes perfection. I am also a painter. Creating in most cases one painting for one or a set of poems. My poems create. Not only express a feeling. They are not specific. They send a message. They are a guideline to one scene. A script if you must.
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A sense of peace and calm takes place in me, even though I have to admit, I find myself really excited and without words to describe this. I really cannot wait to arrive, and see every single thing there is to see; I can already see myself there. As I move on, I encounter a couple of birds standing next to each other, singing for their love, I smile. But, I must keep on walking, even though this seems to be a pretty good spot to rest, next to the rock right by the tree. I move my sight back t...
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Today I look for you, I explore today I won't see you near me Yes, i know Is today the day? It just might be my day, Today will be the day! But is really this what i want? Is me Is you Whom of us?
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I'll light up this cigarette, Burn it up. Take a hit & exhale... taking away the anxiety of this shady life, Fuck it, next in line, just saving the lucky one For when it needs to be lit up And again be set on fire With this ever growing flame will be hard to put out So you can try but you will fail, Cause the paste is just too fast, Too quick, so c' mon Get up & try There is no fucking way out Inhale & watch this clock Take away your life second by second, Until the moment you clo...
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I'll light up this cigarette, Burn it up. Take a hit & exhale... taking away the anxiety of this shady life, Fuck it, next in line, just saving the lucky one For when it needs to be lit up And again be set on fire With this ever growing flame will be hard to put out So you can try but you will fail, Cause the paste is just too fast, Too quick, so c' mon Get up & try There is no fucking way out Inhale & watch this clock Take away your life second by second, Until the moment you clo...
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Colors next to each other on the color wheel, a collection of dots, creating texture, a small drawing to plan a final artwork created by the artist parallel worlds where there is nothing inside just colors across from each other.
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A night out, perhaps at a wedding dance floor. This is the scene I get from a quick read at your poem. This style of writing can be misunderstood, because is not much of sentiments expressed, but there is image in this piece. Like I said is more of a short script of a fantasy scene.
Ahhh, this one, a well loved evil star. You don't find many of these. Is good i like it. It might be over-dressed. I mean the heart of the poem is the shooting star, so much for a tiny little star, don't you think?
yes i belive in this piece. I know we are all honest. You have my vote. whether from one party to the next, politics is all a big party. And well the food is served for all of us to intake. As to going on and on you should.But to these people nothing will be enough(politicians)
To me this is a list of usable words to make up a couple of different other pieces. They don't flow together. But you are my kind of writer. Playful and someone who likes to explore the limits of words in a sentence. You explore the different meaning of each sentence a reader can expect. keep up.
You break away from the theme. Your title is not so suiting to your write or the other way around.
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