THis is a lovely piece. I love when through words, you can explain the feelings of self awareness. You paint a very nice picture with words. However, sorry, it's not journalism...I wonder where the heck you would put this? PS...You got to sucum to fully experience it I believe. warm regards, michelle

I think you have done an awful lot of research on the subject. It is very well thought out. The thing you are missing for this to be true journalism is some quotes. Quotes bring it home, make it interesting give it diversity of voice. TALK to people in your generation. Ask them what's great about Gen Y, ask them what sucks, what they're proud of, embarrased of, ignorant of. Ask the older generations what they think , someone from the Boomers, someone from Gen X...Ask an expert, get a quote fr...

I think this piece is pretty good, short, sweet and to the point. I liked the line about the half off bin, very funny. Although this movie got a lot of hype, I never saw it. The point I think of bringing a broadway musical to the movie format is for people who may not be able to afford a theater ticket to still be able to see it. The whole thing is overall how did it translate from stage to screen, because I think that's the main goal of the producers anyway. Thanks, Michelle

This is really great and reflects true journalism, which many of the stories in this category do not. Not only did I get real information on the place, it was told against the backdrop of a romantic story. This was all woven together very well...it's short and sweet and yet discriptive enough to get a true picture in your head and a real taste of the flavor of Guam...and just as the writer pointed out...I didn't even know was even close to the US..duh!

OK, I understand where you're coming from...I live in South Florida, home to the old. In fact looking at your age, YOU might think i'm one of them, but I still blast the Chili's outta the mini van. Hey, I understand, what you're saying but BACK IT UP...you want to be critical, great...throw in some hard facts mixed in with your very funny opionions about our elderly and what the government does for them. TELL us, how much money they suck outta the system in the course of a year...Have you eve...

I like this piece....however the question remains, why WAS he reelected? It would be interesting to have had some facts of how he did get a second term. Do you really think it was the race card? Did no one else seriously step up to take on the rebuilding of New Orleans. Although I knew he was reelected and scoffed as well, I didn't have the interest myself to really wonder , why...how etc... I don't think that Democrate/Republican makes a play here...let's face it, politicians making bad deci...

First, so you know, I've never seen the movie... but like you I was intrigued by the trailer. The good stuff...you do this with humor and your writing connotes authority of the subject of film. In other words, it comes across that you really know what you're talking about. But this could also be your downfall. A simple review of the film tells enough without telling it all...(YOU LET US KNOW EVERYONE DIES, which should be proceeded with Spoiler!) You make great points about character, protago...

Hey Jordan, I think your thoughts are interesting, however, I think you could expand on it. I think you could have been a little more discriptive, tell us more about the appealing way to dress and how we fail (miserably!) I think its a very funny observation..I hope you know that Orlando is a very strange place because it is a vacation destination and attracts people from all over the world (mostly americans) but still, if you want to see a more 'fashionable' city...New York..LA, you've got t...

WOW! That, so far, is a page turner...I really liked it. It gives you enough to know (or think you know) what happened and it makes you want to know what happened and more, what is going to happen. It is clear, it is intriguing it is scary! I think so far it's very good.

Although the words are good - I give up at this point... it's a sex and drug fest with no point....you give me no reason to care about these people, what happens to them or why... let's get high and all fuck...boring not shocking, how about tell us how this normally awkward sitution happened...bring us there...you just kind of bring it...sorry but it just doesn't feel like something real.