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AGE:
17
LOC: Redwood City, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 11
LOC: Redwood City, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 11
Hi there, I’m just making a new account for myself since I kind of want to start things over on Urbis.
I’m Ana and I’m currently a 15 year old writer :3. I loves to read Manga and watch Anime; I’m hoping to be an aspiring manga author (I can’t really draw…)
I’m mostly a romance writer but I also write action as well. Hopefully, my writings will be enjoyable. Thanks for reading and have a nice day! :D.
If anyone views this profile, please take the time to look at this little cartoon series I’m making. I need some opinions on it, see if my content needs any work.
Also please leave your Urbis name on your comment and I will review any items you have ready for reading ^^. Thanks once again in advanced!
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Pixie Dust Chapter 1 Lights in the Sky Arina was quick to find her two story, three bedroom house despite there being almost no light to guide her way home; it was evident that Arina knew her way around the area, maybe even the city. As she stood in front of her house, she could feel a sense of accomplishment flowing within her; the girl had a good day in school today. She had a heart-to-heart with her mentor Ivana Princeton and Jay Evans had commented on her acting today which made her feel ...
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Pixie Dust Prologue Tracing Memories Reality came to me in such a blur after listening to the screeching of car tires, the screams and shrieks of startled people. I didn’t understand what was going on; I mean I wasn’t hurt or anything. I was perfectly fine. And then a flash of memory hit me, the car accident set-up was all my idea. I wanted to get her attention somehow, somehow. Do you know who I’m talking about? None other than Arina Tenji, Shoren High’s leading actress and my old childhood ...
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Well, with my current escapade with Ray hovering over my head I need to buckle down with my work. Time's running out apparently. So this is what the family and I came to agreeing on: I can't talk on the phone after 9. The phone is either disconnected or my dad answers it. I wouldn't like the latter so... yeah. As for my day with Ray today, I enjoyed it. I know you got really mad about it... but the point is, I have to tell you just why my phone is down. And I have to tell you that the phone m...
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I have to say that at least up to page 5 was pretty interesting. I liked how the guy tried his best to find a way to keep in contact with her. But what got to me from the beginning was how much sophisticated language you used. You tried to add simplistic charm to a story that used a lot of fancy words; if you talk like that in real life kudos to that XD. Anyways, a story should every now and then incorporate such words to add a powerful style to the book, makes it stand out more. Also, for th...
I'm confused, lol. I don't honestly get this but as for poetry mechanics, this was a fine piece. I'm just kind of chuckling to myself here because it sounds kind of confusing yet strangely amusing at the same time. Oh well, I liked this! ^^ Keep writing! X3
This is an emotional piece, clearly. I like this kind of poetry and in maybe the second or third stanzas, I could imagine a slow song with it; yeah I'm weird like that but anyways! "You feel how you shouldn’t These feelings are something you wouldn’t" <-- These two I would change, the fragments don't exactly follow the flow of this piece, they should be complete sentences. Maybe something like: "You feel how you shouldn't feel. These emotions are something you wouldn't feel." You're using ...
Lol, I had to read so I read this XD. I've been there before O.o;; my boyfriend and I had that episode in our first relationship (we're on trial number 2 O.o; ) Anyways, review time! It's short and sweet which is pretty good to me since this poem in particular packs a punch. But you need to clarify who the captor of Juliet's heart? Are we still talking Romeo or the other chick? O.o I like how you strung this together, you mixed medievalness with modernance (if those two ever count as actualy ...
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