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AGE:
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LOC: Dixon, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 20
LOC: Dixon, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 20
I am from the Northern Illinois area where I write short fiction, fanasty, plays, and poetry. My favorite writers are Truman Capote, Hunter S. Thompson, Edgar Allen Poe, Sylvia Plath, Andre Breton, Berlot Brecht, and Tony Kushner. I like talking with other writers and enjoy participating in some competitions.
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Dali Characters: Salvador Dali Gala Dali Pablo Picasso Stefan Zweig Dr. Sigmund Freud Andre Breton Papa Friends (multiple) [Before the beginning an huge egg appears on the stage, and on this egg the world drawn onto it. The egg lays between Salvador's mother and Freud Salvador's mother gives birth to him (on one side of the stage) as Dr. Sigmund Freud is lecturing about his new psychological approach ( on the opposite end).] Freud: What I am presenting to you this evening a break through in m...
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Riding with the Shark Editor: Lisa can you please send him in please, thank you Kid: You wanted to see me sir? Editor: Yes, are you feeling alright? Kid: Yes sir, why do you ask? Editor: Well it's about your recent articles lately (kid cuts him off) Kid: Yes, I know...lately I've been getting foggy in my my mind Editor: Well you need to think clearer fast because I'm going to depend on you for some hot topic articles soon. I'm going to give you a week break Kid: But sir Editor: No, I rather y...
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People think that our role models for our children , but the ones to day out. These people are the ones worsen it. These people came reading this poem. The Z form by A.J Segneri are the ones to blame for bad behavior blame are the ones that we see day in and that have the choice to better our society or up with the concept of how you are
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I feel that this is the most detailed horror piece I have read so far. Most horror pieces are about in your face blood. This was like watching a nice horror film (I know that sounds like an oxymoron). I really enjoyed reading this and I think you should go to your local writing club and see if they have an anthology that they publish.
Very well written. The fludity of this piece was awesome! If I was was your creative writing teacher I would say, ok now that you have a solid piece I would like to see this piece done without having the rhyhems in it. I am not saying this was not a good piece because of that, but it would be interesting to see how it would look and sound when you do take away the known pulse.
I love the detail when the action is described in this excerpt. I think this piece like attract those who like/love action stories, espcially dealing with war/conflict. The character's personalities felt very real when reading their dialgoue. I would like to thank you for requesting me to review your work.
I really loved the beginning part where you shown a brief evolution of aging with one of your characters. Not only that I found this as a good novel piece, but I this could be turned into a stage play. When I read it I can see some nice interaction on the stage with the characters dialogues. I also love the creative names you provided for them. It gives a fresh look to it I found. Keep up the good work and I look forward to read more of your work.
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