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AGE: 26
LOC: Indianapolis, IN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 14

I’m 23…not been seriously writing for too long.  Decided to put some things on here to gather some objective opinions…so feel free to be brutal…that’s why I’m here.

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Poetry / The Shirt
by GreenIguana
Wow, love the idea! I think prickly stubble was maybe a wrong word choice...it's such a harsh word combination compared to all the other adjectives. Would be very interested in reading this when finished.
Poetry / Paula
by Demetri
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Poetry / filled with space
by Deadsage
I loved the imagery in this...the last 3 verses all seemed to have their own...blisters...infected...fire/light...the first was lacking. Would also recommend finding another word for "vitalizing", it really messed up the flow and made for a weak ending. Overall really enjoyed this!
Novel Treatments / Among Legend: Prologue
by Lynn_Riley
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Poetry / Can't I...
by WishingGirl333
I really like this piece. It was very emotional and you conveyed this well! Good job!
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