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AGE:
19
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 26
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 26
Hey, I’m Nikkie. Umm…what can I say about me?? Haha nothing that would be vaguely interesting to any of you but, I digress… I love reading and writing. I love singing, playing guitar and listening to music. Music is a big part of my life, but not nearly as big as whatever book I just finished. I’m currently in the second semester of my sohphomore year of high school eye roll God, I can’t wait to get out… Other than that, I have a tendency to be hopelessly romantic and the rare beautiful moments of life often make me wax poetic for a while. Ermm… I’ve been told that I’m a great friend who’s fun to hang out with but, hey, who am I to tell you how to perceive me? I’ll leave that up to your own imagination…
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Passion rooted deep within Shall always be the greatest sin To those enveloped in poetic truths, Who waste away their precious youth, By never daring to take a chance... What a beautiful thing when turned to song But do not sing the tune too long For it's much too special to waste on those Who don't appreciate the thoughtful prose Or the careful steps of the dance... However deeply passion lies, Perhaps seductively hidden between one's thighs, 'Tis better to set the desire free, Than it is to...
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A kind of unexpected eloquence In the way that he said “I don’t love you anymore” The way it rolled off his tongue, Smooth as ice And just as cold He made it look so simple It was almost polite and You almost thanked him for it However, Your absent mind returned for the present Keeping you from that mistake So instead you turn away Letting your tears speak volumes To later spell out the pain Across the blank paper lines Watching the dark dampness spread Filling all the pages with your empty C...
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(verse) Shades of gray are only here to Wash away the time it took to Realize the world ain't what it seemed Every single step you fall Out of place but you can't call so Let's go back to the place we dreamed Everyday we try to make it Everyday we just can't take it Suddenly, life just ain't the same Now (Chorus) Where blades are used to Count the fears that Always seem to Draw the tears out And all our lives are lived in vain You're dreaming of The perfect world but Reality was Built to hurt...
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We are the empty children From a worthless generation Of broken dreams With silent screams Of anger and self hate And we apparently seem to take This ‘wonderful life’ for granted. There is meaning to our anger That is always overflowing With shallow tears But no one hears That we are scared They’re unprepared For this bomb about to drop. We silently show you all that’s wrong But you can’t seem to pay attention Our numbing pain Is all the same With different ways To clear the maze Of all of th...
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I must say I really like this because at first, it was slightly too complex for me to understand while I was listening to music. So I turned it off and read it again and really liked it. I like the moment of discovered reality where you talk about not having a moment to think about what's going on other than filling the tank when you're at the gas station. I also like the segway from gas prices to songs that remind you of life and memories. You did a good job in using speeding through the str...
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I like this poem a lot because it really does show the desperation of today's generation: the need to inflict pain physically to prove to the rest of the world how much they hurt on the inside. I like how you emphasize it by repeating "The razor screams, across the wrists, of my entire generation" because it's almost like an epidemic these days. My favorite part, I would have to say, is the last line "So we can understand, that we don't need to bleed anymore". That speaks to me. Brill job.
"Lungs filled with tar". Haha, I get it! Smoking, yes? Anyway, I like the like "dry is your complexion, to match your sense of humor". This guy definitely sounds suckish! Seems more like eloquent speaking instead of poetry, but it's still good.
First of all, I love all the passion that you put into this poem. It's really kick arse. There are a few grammar problems in it (of course, i could just be nitpicking) and the second line with the really long word...yeah I have no idea what that says. Was it in one of their songs? 'Cause I'm lost. Haha sorry I'm a loser. But yes, definitely loving the passion behind it.
This interests me, because the way that you name the character "Melancholy man" makes me feel like this can be about anybody or no one in particular. I suppose the last line also makes me think this, since you pluralize the world "soul", as though he is not the only sad soul being referred to, or that it's common knowledge that "sad souls" just don't sleep in general. I like the feel of this.
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