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LOC: Oswego, IL
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LAST LOGIN: April 19
LOC: Oswego, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 19
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Papel No quiero enfrentar este papel pared de mi imaginacion vitrina, entrada y dintel al mundo de mi emocion. Quiero escaper de la carcel que corroe mi Corazon. Miserable pedazo de papel convertido en prision. Es libertad lo que quiero, Libertad para volar. Mil veces la prefiero que en papel yo quedar. TRANSLATION Paper I don’t want to face this paper wall to my imagination window, entrance and frame to the world of my emotions. I want to escape the jail that corrodes my heart. Miserable pie...
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Papel No quiero enfrentar este papel pared de mi imaginacion vitrina, entrada y dintel al mundo de mi emocion. Quiero escaper de la carcel que corroe mi Corazon. Miserable pedazo de papel convertido en prision. Es libertad lo que quiero, Libertad para volar. Mil veces la prefiero que en papel yo quedar. TRANSLATION Paper I don’t want to face this paper wall to my imagination window, entrance and frame to the world of my emotions. I want to escape the jail that corrodes my heart. Miserable pie...
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Papel No quiero enfrentar este papel pared de mi imaginacion vitrina, entrada y dintel al mundo de mi emocion. Quiero escaper de la carcel que corroe mi Corazon. Miserable pedazo de papel convertido en prision. Es libertad lo que quiero, Libertad para volar. Mil veces la prefiero que en papel yo quedar. TRANSLATION Paper I don’t want to face this paper wall to my imagination window, entance and frame to the world of my emotions. I want to escape the jail that corrodes my heart. Miserable piec...
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Ojos Azules (dedicado a Aska) Ojos de vidrio azul profundos, infinitos. Porque me miran, que me queren decir? Porque me queman, que quieren de mi? Esos ojos me han hechizado, piedras de fina Esmeralda, me tiran sin piedad contra roca de irrealidad. Siento mis huesos crujir, un dolor de muerte, mas, prefiero sufrir que dejar de verte. Son tus ojos azules que me tienen loco, loco! Ojos de vidrio aul matenme poco a poco! [TRANSLATION TO ENGLISH] Blue eyes (dedicated to Aska) Blue eyes, deep and ...
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Ojos Azules (dedicado a Aska) Ojos de vidrio azul profundos, infinitos. Porque me miran, que me queren decir? Porque me queman, que quieren de mi? Esos ojos me han hechizado, piedras de fina Esmeralda, me tiran sin piedad contra roca de irrealidad. Siento mis huesos crujir, un dolor de muerte, mas, prefiero sufrir que dejar de verte. Son tus ojos azules que me tienen loco, loco! Ojos de vidrio aul matenme poco a poco! [TRANSLATION TO ENGLISH] Blue eyes (dedicated to Aska) Blue glass eyes, dee...
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The people sent to fight, if they fight with valor, courage, honor, and keep their promise to their country are heroes. It does not matter if who sent them are crooks, liars, decievers. Judgement will come to all on judgement day. The people sent to fight have no option but to obey. IMHO.
Funny, get attention by stating something bold and then just copy from the dictionary. Haven't heard of a "humen". Kids need to learn to live first before making such claims. 15 years is a really short time. Life is long, as long as you want it to be. It will also be as exciting or boring as you want it to be. The difference will be in the attitude you have and the decisions you make when crunch time comes. Will you be a shepard or a sheep?
Very funny, once a Nikki, always a Nikki. Is there an underlying message that men are useless?
Very true. You can add "hmmm!" as well. It is probably a lesser "thanks a lot". My wife does all the things you have put here. I am going to post this in our kitchen and show it to my son just in case so he be put on alert. (he is 14). Can you follow this with words not to say to a woman? For example: "calm down". I always get her mad when I ask her to calm down. "after the game" or "wait till next commercial" also ticks her off.
A very touching poem. For some reason the first five stanzas did not rhyme the the rest did. Was that by design? Maybe better rhythm on the fist ones would make the poem more readable. The poem made me see the girl and her pain, so in reality there is not much more improvement needed. Thank you.
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