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AGE:
22
LOC: Broomfield, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 09
LOC: Broomfield, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 09
I Just Write like one day it will save my life…
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“Empty Inside” As his eyes read his insides burn, He yearns for the change, But the flames get bigger, The picture not what he expected to see, He has become the only hope, The only rope to safety, No turning back or waving the white flag, He’s seen so much but this is quite bad, Sad... No devastating describes this, Nothing to hide this, Behind this can not be left, It will only shift the weight to hold him down, But he feels beneath the ground, And he only hears the sound ...
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I was feeling the poem until you put Fucking in it. I kind of understand that you were in an emotional state at the you wrote it. But cursing to me never bring justice to your writing.
Don't worry about the caps it really doesn't matter. But i couldn't finish the other pages of the poem for some reason the link wont go to them. Its good so far though.
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