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I really like this. When we act out of anger, it always turns to regret later. And the feeling of regret is MUCH stronger than the anger. My only suggestion would be to remove the word "will". I think it is unneccesary, and adds nothing to the quote. Great job!

I really like this! This suits many artists, of different fields. And it describes my feelings EXACTLY about my own art. Now I feel free, and my art IS my voice! Great job!!

I really like this. It has truth to it. And I think it would inspire readers to "Go for their dreams". I think you should add a period at the end, but otherwise, I love it. Well done.

I like it. The punctuation is perfect for this. It's so true. This is how life goes,chronologically. But the message can also be portrayed as depressing, like there is nothing else to life,no happiness, no love,... no anything. A job well done.

I REALLY like this. This is pure, simple poetry. It made me wonder what the writer was thinking or feeling when this was written. This could have multiple meanings depending on how the reader was to portray the meaning or feeling involved. My only suggestion is to consider changing it to 2 seperate sentences. "Ate out love. Tasted like heaven." I think that would make it more dramatic. Great job!