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AGE:
15
LOC: Newland, NC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 03
LOC: Newland, NC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 03
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Version 2
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The sequence of events and the place; All of this resembled the stretched truth and curiosity of a dream. Earth was acting as it should and people were existing like they did but suddenly, gravity decided to conflict with its purpose and snapped. We lifted one of our feet to take one step further and never set both feet back on the ground. In this moment, in my own head, I held on to the moments thought that maybe everyone on the planet was rising. As far out as I could see, there were bodie...
Version 1
11 Reviews
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It happened like a dream. The sequesnce of events and the place.. All of it resembled the stretched truth and lacking reality of a dream. Earth was acting as it should and people were existing like they did and gravity decided to conflict with it’s purpose and snapped. As we lifted our feet to take a step farther, we didn’t set that foot back down. The other foot left the ground and we were all ascending. In this moment, though the sanity wasn’t anywhere around except here, in my own head, I ...
Version 1
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If I could watch for hours Then hours would I stay. My emotions stand like towers But you twist them your own way. I could never quite admit it your ears will never hear. I’m trying hard to fake it but my heart races when you’re near. I wonder what could happen If I could make you see. But alas my heart does sadden because we could never be. This crazy cool feeling like a rush; Call it a crush.
Version 1
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Archaic, wonder-stuck beings, vampires. Smooth, frigid skin captured by pallor. Sheer perfection I do say, and with this I am being demure. Scouring the Earth kissed passionately by nightfall seeking respite. With such grace do they impel through the thickness of a wood; luminescent as the moon pressed against the beguiling black horizon. Then to find themselves enraptured! A weak, ignoble life strikes the everlasting one’s path. Unbidden, they turn this lovely scene to a mass of horror. Writ...
Version 1
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Imagination- The Core Of New Creation Universal Glow
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Creatively worded. I admire the way you have conveyed your meaning. Nice work;; keep it up.
You could make the haiku a little clearer. As I don't understand what is starving to see you, or why there are donuts specifically mentioned? A little tweaking and this could be a catchy piece.
I thought this was an interesting piece. I found the third and fourth stanzas were a little verbose. A clever piece, none the less. Tweak it a little with your words in the third and fourth stanzas and this'll be great! xx
This really describes an outdoor morning. The sensory is quite immense. Overall, this piece is excellent. Wouldn't change a thing. Nice work, keep it up.
I like the format of this and the imagery. It's beautiful. Nifty work, might I say.
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