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AGE:
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LOC: Charlestown, IN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 18
LOC: Charlestown, IN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 18
“Cowards die many times before their death.”
My name is Nathan and I’m 17.
I love to read, write watch movie, and tv.
Also I really get distraced when I write or when writing something. I think of something else and forget about the other thing, but then will come back. So you’ll probably see different things all the time.
I have 6 brothers and sisters, but luckily only four live here. I’ve moved back and forth between Noble, Oklahoma and Indiana, right now I live in Indiana.
I really want to become a director, and I want to create TV shows. Already have some in mind. Ireally want to get a book published also.
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Part One “The forces that tend for evil are great and terrible, but the forces of truth and love and courage and honesty and generosity and sympathy are also stronger than ever before.” -Theodore Roosevelt “The world is a dangerous place, not because of those who do evil, but because of those who look on and do nothing.” -Albert Einstein “When choosing between two evils, I ...
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Chapter Two School and Back Again Well I guess I could tell about myself. My name is Amanda, or Manda, Watson. My hair is black, raven black; Just like my father. Which I hate. I’m seventeen, and my eyes are bluish grayish. I’m skinny, I guess, and curvy and short. The shortest in the family. School sucks; just thought I’d say that. I go to Salem High. There are a ton of people who go there, some thousands. Our football team is named The Witches, yeah corny right? I have a f...
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Chapter One The Red/Green Light It’s not like I planed it. I mean it wasn’t my fault.” “What do you mean ‘It wasn’t your fault’?” said Rob. “He ran into me,” I said pointing at the man talking to a police officer. Rob, my older brother, looked at the man also and shook his head. “It wasn’t his fault Manda. It was his light.” Well this is how it began. I just got my permit and Rob said he would take for...
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Chapter One A New Beginning June 4, 2005 Joseph "Now what did you want to tell us Jason,” said Maverik. The Whales family sat at the large round glass table. Maverik, Evelynn, Jason, Sasha, Erika, Maryann, and Joseph. Probably one of the only times this family sat together in three years. Jason was holding Sasha’s warm hands and smiling. Sasha also had on that big smile of hers. Maverik sat in his black suit, like always, with Evelynn on his right. Her long blo...
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Oh no, Oh no, Oh no Yo Yo Yo Oh no you didn't Sucker tried to play me But you never paid me, Neva Oh no you didn't Payback is a' coming You will be runnin', foreva Oh no you didn't Until i get me vengeance I will never end this mayhem Oh no you didn't I'm a mercenary You ain't got a prayer, you owe MEEEEEE
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Well i thought that was really good. I didn't really see any problems, just when the guards come in, i would make it a little longer when they're cleaning it up. Like make them call aaron bad names or something. Kinda show what brady was talking about, how they weren't good or anything. I love the ending to. How you just put i promise. You could even make it longer, like make a whole play about Brady and Aaron, i think that would be awesome. I hope you got a good grade on it. -Nathan
I really like this and if you're going the way i think you're going i think it will be awesome! I didn'y see any grammar stuff going on, though i'm not good with that. I like when you talk about the aunt dying. It's cool because it's like he is remebering seeing his aunt die but it's just him thinking about killing her. Very creepy. I love how he talks about not wanting to have these thoughts but he can't help it. It kinda gave me chills when reading this story. I really like it. Keep posting...
I like this it's really cool, and true. And i didn't think it was corny. -Nathan
Okay i really like whats going on here. I like how you've made Abba strong on the outside but inside she worrys a lot. I didn't really understand Cindy and Barb though. I'm thinking that they are kinda like the rebels of the crew, they like to gossip a lot? I really don't know what has happened because i didn't read the first chapter but still i like it. I like the way you have written it, and i like the dialogue, keep that up. this sentence is really the only problem i saw. Both Eagle and I ...
You need to put some commas in places, and add some words to some sentences. I figured i'd tell you this and not go into detail since you don't want that. If you've written more about this particular story i haven't read it but i gotta say this was very interesting. Your dialogue i thought was perfect don't change it. The beginning flowed well with the rest of this cause she was obviously drugged or something and doesn't know what's going on. just like the audience. i like it when authors do ...
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