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...enjoys fresh (or awkward) social interaction which leads to a more stable state of social well-adjustment. marko is a lyrical explorer, attempting to drain the meaning out of any verbal exchange, whether from conversation, literature or music. this fascination with words has encouraged and expedited his lyrical and poetic endeavors, culminating in the production of well over 100 different lyrics/poems that currently sit unsung and unread and collecting virtual dust on a laptop hard drive. marko also fancies screenwriting, having commenced scripts for 5 different original tv drama ideas. marko is spiritual and heavy into faith, believing that religion is manmade, while faith, on the other hand, is personal. political causes f…
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I take it all back Every last breath Every last emotion that was untrue Just to hear you breathe again In the moment, caught up in the moment, I was Caught up in the moment I let it roll, everything I held inside, unleashed Pardon my deluge Unintentional yet grave Every barrier broken down Unintentional I take it back I take it all back Every last breath Just to hear you breathe again Misleading, it sounded so misleading, I was Sounding so misleading Yes I said it, but there was no meaning, t...
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Cracking Cracking from a crevice Ever so slight Never so deep Unnoticed Unmanaged Chip off the heart Painless Painless shot in the dark Unweaving Slight numbing feeling Erasure of meaning Something so mighty spawning Deluge at point of drowning Loss of composure mounting It’s always the slightest igniting Melting Melting into matter Dauntingly abstract Always that easy to break Forming Forming small equations Pointing fingers abound Crumbling Crumbling and demolishing Down toward the ground W...
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In Terms (Rhymes and Reasons) Define enough in terms of my love In quantities and amounts that I can decipher In fear of overcompensating or under sufficing I cannot know how much to give I only know myself in terms of myself My needs are clear and met As you are a shadow in the lightest of senses You are known and felt but slightly new territory To express that emotion is to brace myself and push Too little and you will walk away backwards Too much and you’ll fall and spiral away For reasons...
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There’s no one left to touch Inherent danger lies in escape But brave souls existed in masses A door ajar confirms the fact I had no sight to see the coming A lone attraction I sit in gloom Waves of emotion emanate, radiate No receptors left to feel Shreds of existence litter the floor Reminders of the higher beings Blind to the lesser yet still heightened Aware enough to flee the scene of crime I was numb before the cold I was blind before the flash Nothing worsened with the coming blow A bl...
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Your one-dimension casts shadows on the ground Like elusive voids Unquenchable, perpetually deep In the meantime, allow me to ponder Let my daze seep and settle Comprehension will never come I will not feed your hunger I am not of your kind Nevermore I’ll share my light Count on the stars and disco balls Your affection is thin like ice in May A translucent peril Undetectable, murky trap Numbness of the mind cos you can’t feel I’ll need a minute to regain emotion Regret comes ‘round the bend I...
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The message you were trying to convey was palpable... The first thing that came to mind while reading it was that you used too many cliches for my taste. I tend to naturally go out of my way to avoid cliches and redundancy in my own lyrics. I'd re-word things like "Don't know why this is happening" or "tearing me apart" or "I'm through with the world". Personally, I think there are more descriptive and efficient ways to create a mood and weave a moment. I loved the way the beat just came to m...
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It reads like a pop song. The idea that you present of missing your significant other has been posed time and time again, but you manage to present it in a semi-new fashion. I particularly like "But as for now I’m out here under falling stars Do you miss me Miss me where you are Cause every night… We talk past midnight And it just feels so right I can’t go a day Without you on my mind So just hold on". I liked the title, so that same line in the song caught my attention. They're good lyrics, ...
Unique. The simplicity, though, (there being only two chunks of words) may be what bothered me when I read it. Separating it into more comprehensive chunks allow the words to flow better. Love the title, obviously works with the lyrics. I see this more like a poem than a song...I would imagine finding a cadence to fit the words would be hard. The entire thing is so metaphorical, the colors representing changes in your life, I see it more as a poem.
The imagery in this piece is amazing. It tends to lessen near the end, which may be a possible consistency problem. To me, my first impression, aside from imagery out the whazoo, was that it was a bit wordy and conversational almost. Not that that is a problem, it just doesn't have that natural cadence that less wordy, pieces have. But then again, the thing that I like most is that it's not that symmetrical. It still makes sense. Most memorable lines are, "I touched your back in solace You re...
I completely saw Eminem shouting these lyrics at me...very true to your own description, "aggresive, emotional..." I'd work on the first verse...I don't feel it with the rest of the lyrics, kind of like the odd ball out. Maybe if you went back and studied the last part of the song you could continue that emotion and "flow-yness" into the intro of the song... The only overall comment is tie the song together more...don't go and make each verse the same number of syllables and do a set rhyming ...
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