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AGE: 54
LOC: Mesa, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 14

Male,53,novelist with four currently available and more on the way.

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Strange Change
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STRANGE CHANGE Chapter 1 THE DREAM OF THE WINGED MONKEYS Standing at his open locker and tightly clutching his gym bag, 14-year-old Trenton Letreque, a popular student at Lakefield High School, knew he could do it. Knew it the moment the childhood memory seared his mind like a lightning bolt two weeks ago. A memory provoked by an advertisement for the annual showing of The Wizard Of Oz, with several scenes from the classic film, one of which was the winged monkeys flying to the wicked witch’s...
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Action Adventure / Harmony's Angel
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HARMONY'S ANGEL Chapter 1 DEMONS AND DARKNESS Sixteen-year-old Harmony Hammerschmidt had fantasized several different ways of killing Uncle Bob in the three years since being abandoned by her mother on his doorstep, the top floor of a three-flat on Chicago’s far west side. In fact she entertained three murderous fantasies specifically. The first involved killing only Uncle Bob. She would simply wait for some Saturday afternoon when Aunt Rosie was gone with the kids, Melissa, 12, and Jerry, 13...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Cloud Drops
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CLOUD DROPS Chapter 1 NIGHT-FLIGHT …and the wheels were lifted up over against them: for the spirit of the living creatures was in the wheels. — EZEKIEL 1:20 Slowing to 50,000 miles per hour, the UFO enters the upper stratosphere with the circle of its 18 fiery bluish-white lights appearing to blink. But it is only an illusion created as the huge disc, passing through the mists and vapors at supersonic speeds, arcs towards the Earth and begins its descent. From the Earth far below it might ap...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Other Dreams
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Chapter 1 THE EGGMAN The heat of mid-August had no mercy on the little town of Harlot. It was hot and dry and the farmers of northern Illinois were pleased. The season had been perfect. The spring rains had come right on time, just after planting, and the blessing had continued with perfectly timed intermittence throughout the summer. Now the corn was tall and healthy and emerald-green, the long, slender leaves of the sturdy stalks rustling gently in the breeze. For the farmers this was the g...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Sweet Magnolia (continued...3)
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The three key's to success in Pro-writing are: Revise, Revise, Revise, and then revise it again!! YOUR VERSION: My eyes opened and I realized that I was resting on a soft bed, covered with a furry blue blanket. The birds outside chirped rhythmically and the sunlight reflected from the window was hurt my eyes. I could tell the time of day was morning. I sat up looked around to see the walls were painted pink and the drawers and the desk stood against it, standing opposite of each other. 8:04AM...
Action Adventure / Freight Train
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Messiah Complex Ch. 1
You are off to a good start, but to really grab the reader you need to tighten this piece up a bit and get to the point more quickly. The key, as I tell everyone, is to revise, revise, revise, and then revise it again!!! A misspelled word and a couple of awkward sentences, though; Where you say "escalades" I think you meant "escalates." Also the following sentence: “You exaggerate my influence,” Rothskar said, settling down behind his desk, motioning to the armchair in front of the desk." You...
Action Adventure / Crimson Woods: Part one
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