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AGE:
61
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 08
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 08
Nicky Jones taught in Secondary Education for ten years
before leaving the profession to bring up her two children. She
trained as an Integrative Counsellor in 1997, and worked in
Primary Care until recently. Her poetry has been published
in a variety of magazines and in the poetry anthology The New
Poetry. She lives in North Wales.
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THINKING “What are you thinking?” she asked. “Nothing,” he replied. “What are you thinking?” she insisted. “Nothing,” he lied. While inside his mind were: Marshmallow nipples, rippling folds of moist, limbs of gold and hip of smooth, arching loins and breast of girl, a spasm of ecstasy, Nirvana coming from nowhere, out of her pink forfeit, plumbing his depths like a submarine, ploughing passion’s furrow, a seam of silver melting over blonde meringue. “What are you thinking?” she asked. “That...
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I like the idea of painting randomised people, but the faceless word was a puzzle. Is the viewer supposed to imagine the face? This says so much about the writer of course. Enjoyed. Nicky
I like the philosophy behind this idea. You only used 4 words. Amazing! I find 6 hard enough. Day dreaming is good...can lead to great things. Warmest regards, Nicky.
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Hi Russell Sounds facinating. I particularly like the idea regarding the history of the microbe,the fact it has lain dormant for so long. There is nothing wrong with the plot outline at all, in my opinion. It drew me in and made me want to know more. "These are questions that CIA agents Ridley Fox and Doctor Nita Colvin must resolve in my novel, Pandora’s Succession." This line sounds more like a pitch to an agent/publisher than the blurb on the back of your book, beacause of the word MY...be...
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