Reviews
Short Story / My Life
Good nutshell of your life. Hopefully the boring allows some respite from the exciting, creative hectic times! Warmest regards, Nicky.
Non-fiction / 6 Word Memoir (2)
I like the idea behind this very much. Warmest regards, Nicky.
Lyrics / 6 words
Nothing stays the same, and loving doen't change that. Excellent 6 word story, for it throws up so many questions. Warmest regards, Nicky.
Quotes / six-word memoirs
Intersting take on creativity. The use of the word BUT is a puzzle for me. Made me think...is pen analogous for the writer? If so it makes perfect sense. Warmest regards, Nicky.
So sad, this says it all. I have been there and felt helpless too. For 6 words this says so much. Warmest regards, Nicky.
Poetry / Winning memoir
A teenage mother has so much energy. Gravity isn't a problem then, not even when carrying a child on the hip. I'd love to know how you are defying gravity! I enjoyed this. Warmest regards, Nicky.
Query Letter / Pandora's Succession
Hi Russell Sounds facinating. I particularly like the idea regarding the history of the microbe,the fact it has lain dormant for so long. There is nothing wrong with the plot outline at all, in my opinion. It drew me in and made me want to know more. "These are questions that CIA agents Ridley Fox and Doctor Nita Colvin must resolve in my novel, Pandora’s Succession." This line sounds more like a pitch to an agent/publisher than the blurb on the back of your book, beacause of the word MY...be...
Short Story / dreams
I like the philosophy behind this idea. You only used 4 words. Amazing! I find 6 hard enough. Day dreaming is good...can lead to great things. Warmest regards, Nicky.
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Haiku/Senryu / 6 word memoir
I like the idea of painting randomised people, but the faceless word was a puzzle. Is the viewer supposed to imagine the face? This says so much about the writer of course. Enjoyed. Nicky

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