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AGE:
22
LOC: Westfield, MA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 14
LOC: Westfield, MA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 14
I WRITE MAINLY SONGS.. THEY ARE A VARIATION OF DARKNESS… AND RANGE FROM REVENGE AND KILLING TO BEING A LOST SOUL AND NOT KNOWING WHO YOU ARE ANYMORE… SOME MAY SAY THAT MY WORK IS TOO DETAILED BUT I THINK THAT DETAIL IS WHAT MAKES WRITING GREAT AND STAND OUT… AFTERALL WE WANT IMAGERY IN WHAT WE READ. =] I AM 21 YEARS OLD AND I AM WICCAN. I AM ALSO GAY IF ANYONE HAS A PROBLEM WITH THAT I DONT REALLY CARE.. YOU DONT LIKE IT DONT TALK TO ME.. ITS AS SIMPLE AS THAT… I HAVE A VERY FOUL MOUTH AS YOU MIGHT BE ABLE TO TELL FROM MY SONGS… IM SURE MOST PEOPLE WONT READ THIS BUT FOR THOSE THAT DO THANKS.. I AM NOT A GIRL.. OBVIOUSLY IT SAYS MALE NOT FEMALE.. I HAVE A BOYFRIEND.. AND I LOVE HIM MORE THAN ANYTHING IN THE UNIVERSE… LETS SEE…
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COME INTO MY EYES AND SEE DEEP DOWN. SEE WHAT ALL THOSE CAN'T EVEN IMAGINE. ALL THE NIGHTMARES YOU HAVE. THAT YOU WAKE FROM IN THE DEAD OF NIGHT. AND DON'T BE FOOLED. THE THINGS ARE VERY REAL. AND THEY CAN HURT YOU. KILL YOU EVEN. SEE THE COLD. SEE THE DARK. SEE THE EVIL. FEEL THE COLD. FEEL THE DARK. FEEL THE EVIL. SEE THE COLD. SEE THE DARK. SEE THE EVIL. FEEL THE COLD. FEEL THE DARK. FEEL THE EVIL. COME INTO MY HEART DEEP IN. SEE HOW SLOW AND COLD THE BLOOD RUNS. SEE THE FIRE BURNING AWAY ...
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JUST BREATH INTO ME. OPEN MY EYES. I'VE NEVER SEEN SUCH A CLEVER DISGUISE. I NEED YOU TO GET ME OUT OF HERE. DRIP JUST ONE TEAR. I'M STUCK IN THIS HELL. AND THERE IS NO WAY TO TELL. I'M IN A CHAOS COMA. WITH NO WAY OUT. I'M IN A CHAOS COMA. AND I CAN'T GET OUT. I'M IN A CHAOS COMA. AND THERE IS NO HOPE FOR ESCAPE. CHAOS COMA. NO HOPE. NO WAY OUT. JUST LOOK INTO ME. OPEN MY EYES. TAKE OFF THE DISGUISE. GET ME THE HELL OUT OF HERE. SHED A DAMN TEAR. I'M STUCK IN HELL. WITH NO WAY TO TELL. I'M I...
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STAY AWAY FROM THE WORLD THAT YOU KNOW OH SO WELL. IT'S DISEASED YOUR MIND MORE THAN YOU COULD POSSIBLY KNOW. JUST STAY AWAY FROM HERE. YOU NEED TO GET AWAY. GET AWAY FROM HERE. IT'S TOO LATE FOR THEM. BUT YOU STILL HAVE A CHANCE. GET AWAY.... THERE'S NO GOOD. YOU NEED TO FIND WHO YOU ARE... WHO YOU ARE. GET AWAY.... THERE'S ONLY CORRUPTION. IT MEZMERISES YOU. YOU NEED TO BREAK THE TRANCE. TAKE YOUR LIFE BACK BEFORE IT ENDS. LET GO OF FANTASY. GET A GRIP ON REALITY. THIS WORLD IS FAKE. ALL IN...
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LIAR... YOU TEMPT ME. LIAR...YOU LOVE ME. LIAR...YOU HATE ME. LIAR...YOU KILL ME. NEVER ASK WHY I DO WHAT I DO. NEVER SAY LOVE...CUZ THERE'S ONLY HATE. NEVER SAY WARM...CUZ THERE IS ONLY COLD. NEVER SAY LIGHT...CUZ THERE'S ONLY DARK. NEVER SAY LIFE...CUZ THERE IS ONLY DEATH. NEVER!!!! NEVER!!!! NEVER!!!! NEVER SAY AGAIN AS THIS MIGHT BE THE LAST TIME. NEVER SAY LATER CUZ IT MIGHT BE NOW. DON'T PUT OFF THE THINGS YOU NEED TO DO NOW. YOU MIGHT NOT GET A CHANCE TO DO THEM LATER. SITTING BACK LET...
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I WILL TAKE AWAY. YOUR LAST WILL TO STAY. YOU DON'T WANT TO FUCK WITH ME. I WILL SEE YOU FALLING DOWN TO HELL DON'T YOU SEE. SEE YOU WILL DIE BY YOUR OWN HAND. SLOW AND PAINFUL DOWN POURS THE SAND. TRYING TO STAY ALIVE FOR THE NIGHT. AS YOU SEE THE PRECIOUS LIGHT. IT'S JUST A MYTH ABOUT THE BEAUTY. SUCH PAIN AND SUCH CRUELTY. YOU DON'T EVEN WANT TO BE DEAD. YOU'D RATHER BE STUCK IN YOUR OWN HEAD. FUCK IT ALL I MAKE YOU SAY. NOW TAKE ALL THE PAIN AWAY. WITH JUST ONE MOTION YOU CAN END IT ALL. ...
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this piece is very good... i love the imagery and the wording. most people view darkness as evil and scary even.... but this piece shows a different side to it. a calm and peacful side.. great job. i think the line breaks may need a little work... but then again i cant really tell that just by reading it.... i dont know how you would want them to flow and what not... so yeh.... great job though... keep it up =D
i like this piece... its really good... it has a great flow to it... and it has deep emotion behind it... a lost love that wasnt meant to be it seems... im sure theres alot of people that can relate to it. the rhyme scheme is a bit confusing at times but as they say not all poems have to rhyme. great job and keep it up. =D
this piece is good... i liked how you talked about truth as if it was a person.... i think it could have been a bit clearer though.... but i do like it... great start... and keep it up.....
thats pretty good.... but i do have to admit its just like you threw words down on a page like that you would say to this person... and if youre going to have a rhyme scheme you should try to stick to it... well its only the first line of the second paragraph... i can see this being a song.. but maybe change some wording and fix the spelling errors... and expand it a bit more... maybe make it have a chorus if its supposed to be a song.. but i do really like the message in this.. anger and sad...
i liked this... but i do agree with a few of the others... its not clear.. it lacks clarity but thats about it.. other than that its great. maybe if you expanded it or something then it would be more clear.. but i do like it.
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