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AGE: 40
LOC: Salem, OR
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Limericks / Luddite Delight
Version 2
7 Reviews   9 Comments
Dem dat like poems written by WORD Da rest of us? We’s all just absurd. We is dumber dan beans, writin sans dem machines! And our art was all dropped from a bird!
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Limericks / Luddite Delight
Version 1
2 Reviews   2 Comments
To them that like poetry written by WORD(Registered Trademark) The rest of us? We's all just absurd. We's dumber than beans, creatin without dem machines! And our art was all dropped from a bird!
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Poetry / Strange Buddy
Well, I scored this high in "Warm a few hearts" because it should definitely warm the heart of Laura. But I didn't score it high in the other two sections because, 1) It is tailored to one person that others might not know. 2) It uses too many cliches like "she listens to a different drummer" with out using them to make a new message, or a larger image. 3) It is simply a listing of attributes. I would work on a different way to say the same thing as the cliches. Instead of the different drum...
Quotes / Making love
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Criticism / the fate of our land
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Criticism / and
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Limericks / MONEY WELL SPENT
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