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AGE: 20
LOC: Las Vegas, NV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 10

My name is Norma Lizeth, I am 20 years old. This is my senior year in college (NSC) and after a long break I have come back to Urbis. I hope to have time to look at a lot of neat stories (and some poems) before classes get intense.
English is not my home language so I apologize if my wording seems odd. Good reviews are always welcome and new friends as well.

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Poetry / Crossing Rivers
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Crossing Rivers How I wish to be there for you when you face the new world. How I wish they cared to understand you when they see how special you are. I want to be there for you when your eyes start to water. I want them to respect you when you say the truth. Just like I taught you. I am not your mother, since I would never spoil you as she does. I am not your friend, since I would never speak badly of you. How beautiful you looked. Since I was a child I prayed for you. How can’t we not...
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Chapter 2: Binding Rings Scott felt strong hands pull him from his warm bed. At first, he thought it was a new dreadful dream. He was standing on the cold floor of the dorm looking up at the older Thigthens. They held his shoulders and pushed him forward. The gray walls of the dorm somehow seemed out of place as he gained good balance. He looked at those standing at the entrance. He had wanted this to be just another ordinary morning, after a bad dream, he could not ask for more. Instead, f...
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Chapter 1: Inside the Beast In his young mind, order was all that mattered. He did not think much as he ran along the grey halls. It was just going with the flow of things. He knew the paths from memory. Still he kept a map with him just in case. The lights flickered above. He wanted to hurry before it happened again. I should report that. His white and lose clothes rustling was the only sound along stonewalls. The pipes that went through them fit perfectly with no leaks. It was all in ord...
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Prologue: Melina was clinging to the chair as the doctor smiled at her. It was time to choose. She tried to smile back and not really think of the downside. Her husband placed a soft hand on her shoulder. They had already talked about it. It was going to be the right. The doctor held two fists closed around two similar objects. No matter what they would be happy; he had reminded them. She pointed to the right before he opened his palm. A small pink pear showed. “Congratulations, it’s a girl” ...
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Poetry / Box and String
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Box and String This small box of mine Not so small or delicate Carrying my heart inside It was never enough to stop me I turn my back on loneliness I take my box and open it I find what was ruined The string that I used to weave I see the beginning of my pride Follows my insensitivity Then follows my restlessness More, more, I want more The rush of all ruined the master piece Everything inside is tangled Knot and knot I examine Desperation screams to destroy it And forget I try and then my ch...
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Short Story / The New Age Holmes
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Short Story / Paints
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Horror / Vampyres
Diary of a crazy teenage vampire? As much I try to evade reading about 'good' vampires now days, I actually like yours...though I am not sure if she has done good or bad stuff. I didn't find this scary at all, though I believe it has the potential to be if you included more detail like in the process of changing into a vampire and so. This has the feeling of 'The Reformed Vampire Support Group' by Catherine Jinks with the touch of naughtiness of 'Peeps' and 'The Last Days' by Scott Westerfeld...
Children's / Jaynie and the Bad Day
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Children's / Meet BB and Sissy
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