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AGE: 24
LOC: Fort Lee, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 10

Hi I’m your host. any direct hate comments toward my style, my lack of talent, obnoxiousness, or you just can’t stand me you can IM me @ dtownwriter@aol.com
if you actually think I have talent and you want your head examined IM me @ killerqueen70@hotmail.com. also hit me up on www.myspace.com/isisamonhathor

Thank you all of your comments are greatly appreciated.

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Short Story / Flashbacks
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"I, Michael Aaron Washington, do solemnly swear to support and defend the Constitution of the United States against all enemies, both foreign and domestic, and to bear true faith and allegiance to the same and to obey the orders of the President of the United States and the Officers appointed over me in accordance with regulations and the Uniform Code of Military Justice. So help me God!" *** "Tomika Gertrude Wall." "Brandon Anthony Warsaw." "Makyah Alahze' Washington." "Michael Aaron Washing...
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I ran it straight into her. Her neck stretched and her head fell back. I wrapped my hands around her veiny neck and watched her eyes roll back. She told me she liked this but she was squealing and flinching. The muscles in her vagina had begun to tighten and I was losing my erection. I took my hands off of her throat and she smiled and bit her lip. My erection only half hard. Sweat suffused my hands as I gripped her breasts. I felt nothing. The only thoughts to keep me pushing into her was th...
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Short Story / City Transportation
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I could ride on a city bus for hours. Parfumes of unwashed sweat and dried piss to suffuse my nose. It sits in my clothes. Sitting next to a window that reads "This Window does not open" I gaze into chaotic streets and people who trip over their feet. A man offered me some dope yesterday and I said no. He sat next to me and watched me watch everyone else. I moved further back of the bus. The bus driver occasionally glances in the mirror; us children can't behave talking to ourselves or to som...
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Short Story / pink lipstick
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He came to church wearing an orange dress and high heels. That was all I saw but I could only imagine him with hot pink lipstick and a blonde matted wig. Well they said he walked in by mistake and I said "make no mistake that a man with a problem like that needs the Lord in his life." They put me at ease in saying that he thought he was walking into an adult video store. Two weeks later while walking to Gratiot just a block from Michigan ave. I saw him in an alley in a lake of blood around hi...
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oh man does this bitch give good head. . . he called them "award winners" and when he asks me he says while staring blankly into space " so how about anohter one of those award winners" and he's smart enough to realize that you don't have to look at someone to konw what they are saying. he continued staring cooly at the projection screen sloppliy holdin his M203 and as i nodded my head he said "im" and went back to his seat. the class came and went just as the evening traded it's bright sunl...
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i give you an 8 for its abstract quality. for one thing i'm interested to know how did this story come about it is awfully detailed and personal.is this a true story i want to know what you can tell me aobut the characters. if you want i would like for you to email me about this. it sometimes can be hard to write abstractly usu. if it isn't real or didn't really happen. i've done smack before and i know the effects. i have no real critiques.i didn't see any grammatical errors but i was readin...
Poetry / Famous Feople
i only give it seven because i am bias against anything not related to the harlem ren. call me narrow-minded. . .it wouln't be the first or last however this was highly entertaining and very creative. i don't think i have the brain power to "whip" something like this up i'm interested to read more of your work but urbis won'tlet me get to or my server is just weird. -from an amused soldier fighting for our country
Horror / Darkness - 1
i can't say the best horror on urbis because i havent' been doing alot of reviewing lately but i will say aside from a few spelling errors this is pretty damn good. i was instantly reminded of the movie 'i am legend' from the first page. however i will say that mainstream horror and/or zombie stories are becoming more and more popular doesn't mean everyone can write them. but you do pretty well considering the genre i'm defintely looking forward to reading more.
Humor/Satire / Defining English Words
zebra's is taht a french attire. i don't think i own one of those. i myself admire satirists. just curious what brought about this particular style.
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"Regard less what you might think" was this intentional that you have regardless as two words. and I think you left out the "of" in this first line. "expecting mothers, high fructose corn syrup, and 800mg painkillers" I don't quite get this but it sounds like it has someting to do with pregnancy. I like it though.
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