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I'm a big fan of strong imagery and tight, sparse wording. This has some nice images, but I think it could be tightened up a bit (tightening up is a big bias on my part, unless you're kind of stuck in a strict form, so take that for what it's worth). 1st stanza: I love the line "...bound with Sunday chains..." The chestnut hair as a car crash is a nice image, but I also think it's one area to tighten a little -- e.g., take out "is" from that line. I also don't see the connection between lines...

I like this. It's nice and tight, with only six words to work with, and it's a fun, strong image. If I had any talent with origami, I'd have thousands and thousands of these hanging around.

Hahaha! This is great, and oh so true. I love decent limericks and this made me laugh out loud. Too bad it's not useful outside the context of Urbis :(

Finally, a limerick! I'm sure there are a lot here, but this is the first one I've seen so far in this category. It definitely has the qualities I look for: 1 - off color reference 2 - humorous 3 - the right form I like it. It made me laugh.