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AGE: 27
LAST LOGIN: August 17

I am 25 years of age. I have been writing for a decade now. Not in pursuit of anything, just as my medicine. Only in the last month have I shared. Now it is a drug.

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Poetry / Full Circle
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Karma, comes around full circle The sun, the moon, the planet, comes in full circle As does the feeling, perceptive of life. Ups and downs, all around Love and hate, anticipate Ying and yang, not one without the other To break apart is to fall apart Live in the circle and bless the path It all appears, it all is for its purpose Not coincidence, but the circle is life. Perfection
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Poetry / Sunshine
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Seeing the sun once again. Feeling the warmth on my skin. Vibrant, optimistic, a force greater than comprehension. Being alive inside, no weight, no worries man. Isn't it great, isn't it about time! Share with me in a moment. Take it in. Feel the sunshine once again.
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Poetry / Labels
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Beauty is lost in labels we give to connections. It is weakness, restricts the natural growth between people and self growth. Impeding, commitments, obligations that are attached when we are suppose to love freely. Then those ignorant taking being free as an open invitation to be fucked on many levels. Shame Learn to love. It will make you cry when you tear the labels off.
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Poetry / History
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The delight in the strength of old structures The sensation that this is times past Everyone come to see Everyone come to breathe Everyone come to feel The complicated formations Standing solid like protection from the worlds worries The history within each blade of grass Teaches us peace Tranquility within our energy
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Poetry / Journey
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Set free your fears Ill draw you near To a place of undying satisfaction Let go of what you know I am a destination never conquered When everywhere is a dedication to pure tranquility You will know peace
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Poetry / Domination
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Poetry / Autumn
I enjoyed this piece. The choice of words puzzled me at some, but it did bring imagery. The length of the lines made the poem move at different places. I am not sure if this intital speed was what you wanted. It speeds up. But they also give importance. I like it.
Poetry / Free by Chance
My fav. Brings back good ol days. The flow was excellent. I could see you sitting there. Excellent job!
Poetry / Naked Morning
I really enjoyed where you were going with this. You use good imagery. The speed was good in the stanza -I see you get up-. Try to keep a steady tempo. I do understand waking will be slower, but something with the flow is a tad off. But I am not a pro.......take it with a grain of salt. It brought great pictures in my mind of waking with a loved one. Great job! Keep writing.
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