Perlandria's profile

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AGE: 36
LOC: San Jose, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 07

I’m a creative spirit.  I’ve done some lyrical writing/collaborating more recently for an up and coming local band, and have been writing prose, poetry, and interested in creative writing since I was around 12 years old.

In my friendships, I tend to seek out those who value/enjoy creative writing, music, photography.. Any vivid means of self-expression.. Honest people, who prefer realism. People who aren’t afriad to be different. Just keep it real. Have fun. Feel free to be sarcastic. Feel free to laugh at my jokes. ;)

You can also find me on myspace.  Just ask.

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Poetry / At last
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And I shall so delight In the times when kisses mingle With all our words I linger.. in a moment Imagined What's yet to be Just round the corner As if months and years have just flown by Suddenly and all at once As if all my impatient pleas.. Have turned to dust.. over time And now I stand here, feelin nearly unprepared For the love of my life, to just arrive A bit nervous.. a bit clumsy Like a little girl, in her first Sunday dress And yet his love.. It keeps me company A...
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Poetry / A quiet stirring
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Lost inside, a wistful tear Heavy with past recollections Quietly reliving The throes of passion To the times of disdain For the final time. A certain sorrow, fills the air Heavy, it clings to the mood Like a humid summer afternoon Just before rain Beneath a southern sky. And my thoughts, they turn To times, in my youth The memories and wishes Sail away, on still water Places left now to evolve Without my touch Present no longer Though few questions linger Now whimsic...
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Lyrics / Dreaming Alone
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Beneath the veil, of morning The world still sleeps, so why can't I? My angel.. Im still dreaming of your smile Background vocal: (Dream-ing Alone..) I watch, I wonder, As days go by I dream, I ponder Reflections, dancing in your eyes My love~ my darling.. Come with me Take time, remember with me So we can believe, again. And find our dreams, again Blessings, to be revealed I watch, I wonder, As days go by I dream alone, while I Sing you little lullabies I dream in motion By and by I...
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Poetry / Awareness
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Turning round Chasing after falling stars Running swiftly, in my attempt To catch each and all Each one sheltered, in my cupped hand Little shimmers Touching my world like dewdrops Nestled gentle in the mist of a morning, still quiet Not yet aware Your emotions Push past the exterior Into a world I share, with none Pressing the limits My shade from the sun A shelter, my comfort and I feel you now so strong.. right here I am afriad to believe That I could ever feel, so safe Secure in something...
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Poetry / Faithless
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There is nothing that tugs At my soul.. such as this Nothing that has weighed me down more Nothing to reason, no end in sight I’m left in darkness, and without any form Movement slows as realization settles down Thick, like fog Hopes diminish.. after a moment of clarity Fades to dim Little reminders coming, like raindrops To touch my skin Only to leave my mind Only to disappear Another day, another year I don’t want to see anymore All you cannot show me And I no longer wish to hear Words that...
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Young Adult / The Tunnel excerpt from ch.3
by cgendebien
First note, the opening line should reveal an all TOO joyful radio host (just grammar correction) Also "Alison barely made her way over to the light switch tumbling over books that lay scattered on the floor" I would just simply add a comma, after "light switch". Then in the last paragraph, you meant, I'm sure to say "wrapping a coarse towel.." you just used a different spelling for the word "rapping" (AKA SongStyle we all know. I might choose not to end the sentence where you have, but rathe...
Limericks / Obama Limerick (July 23, 2009)
by obamafu
Whimiscal parade.. of the factual current politics. I've never read anything like it. I must say, I rather enjoyed this.. and would certainly enjoy reading more of your work.
Poetry / Insomnia
by DLCW
Very descriptive and well written. It left me as a reader wondering, about the parameters of this old friend.. whispers and all.. is this a lost love? If so or not.. perhaps there is a way you could present that in another stanza.. that mentions some of these memories.. you'd revisit? Just a suggestion.. overall a really nice read, well thought through from start to finish. Thanks for sharing!
Poetry / untitled 2005 #1
by Lena17
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Romance / Skin Deep - Chapter 9
by wisedec4u
Overall, amazingly well written and a very good read. It holds the reader and keeps the momentum going.. and pages turning. On page 4 I see you making the mention of students passing by and it read: "She noticed several students walking pass and was tempted to pull away from his grasp." I just simply change it to either "she noticed several students passing by" or "she noticed several student walking past them, and was tempted in that moment to pull away...." Obviously, this was a minor error...
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