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Soft blue neon haze, in the dust of American dreams. Apathy takes reigns from false hope. In vacant motels, cheap landmarks leading home for classless failures. In technocolor dreams, perfection visual, not quite so real. In the hopes of hard-working men, children of false virtues. A sharp cry is silenced, replaced with a soft mumble of exposed hopes and dreams. Soft neon sings, screams agonized words of poets lost, and brings on the stupor and ecstacy of dreamers who care not to dream.
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Moonbeam streamings, Tattered dreamings, EVery life ill never have. It's just cheering, to the dreary, Rings and coffee stains JUst so easy, To start seizing, Just pray i never start Happy, What is happy? Maybe just not sad. Indecisive? Inconclusive? Maybe just a tad Seeing Teamings, Breaking Seamings, Do they see the hidden meanings? Something more, What's this for? Give an edge and take the bore Happy, What is happy? Maybe just not sad. Indecisive? Inconclusive? Maybe just a tad Loving Lust...
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I thought that the reviews were true, and also had a good dose of humor. It was fun to read. Nice Job.
Lyrics / Claire de Lune
The language is excellent, and I just get a good vibe from this. It really is an excellent piece. Great Job
I think that you captured the desperateness well. I like the descriptiveness. As for the part in parenteses, I don't beliveve that it really flows with the rest of the lyrics.
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