PoeticSydrome's profile
AGE:
41
LOC: Piedmont, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 20
LOC: Piedmont, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 20
I am a writer of many words and feelings. When I sit down to write, not only do I strive for perfection…. I strive for meaning as well. Even when I’m not writing, I’m thinking about how to better a story or poem. I have been known to always carry a notebook wherever I go. In case an idea crops up. My writing is a land of fantasy where I can imagine things that doesn’t happen in reality. Writing is breathing to me and the words I breathe like oxygen.
My interests are many and vary in no particular order. I am an avid reader and writer. I read anything from long epic fantasy novels, to non-fiction, and articles. One day, I hope to become etheir a teacher of english, an editor, or an archeologist of some sort. I am highly interested i…
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That is oh so true. Good job at conveying your subject. Words can be hurtful, when said by those who sometimes don't mean to hurt but hurt anyway. Good job! Could have been a little longer though
There are quite a few typos here. In the first sentence it should be *hide* I think. In the 2nd to the last paragraph, it should be "*maybe it was for me.*" You'll be able to tell where I made the changes. And in the last stanza, it should e *hour* instead of *housr.* I liked how you described the affects of alcholhol on it's user and what it means when one is not aware of their actions. And the desperations and sadness od how one feels to be a whore. Good job and nicely written!
That is true, but then again that is not. Good concept though. Why do you say this? Just out of curiousity.
This was good. I liked it. I'm guessing this is talking anout how beautiful someone is every time they wake up.
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This was really interesting and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing and I love the title! That is what caught my attention. Nice descriptions here and you have a great flow too. It's true, not just any word can do justice for a poem and the wanna be's never get it right or they always assume they get it right when really they don't. I loved this. Although I'm not really sure I got the interpretation right. Good job and keep writing.
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