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The butterfly that resides within my soul will never regret With every occurrence, endurance of ache, a lesson learned I am looking down at you, knowing this is the last struggle For my emotions and intelligence you will no longer juggle The weight of your words embedded sink stones on my soft skin Did your best to keep my head beneath the water’s surface Your expressions were always tinted with the darkest of hues I was the perpetual radiance for your oil and you blew the fuse My power...
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In stanza one, I am not certain I understand these lines, "Whose touch caressed now half my life, reborn And bared for us, our mercies' tender throes". My overall interpretation of this piece is as follows, please feel free to either correct me or confirm my accuracy. This seems to be a complicated relationship. Although the woman gives of herself freely, it is not often reciprocated due to the man not being in love with her. He considers her a wonderful person because she has been nothing bu...
The story structure and sequence of this piece is on target. From a reader's perspective, I am not certain if this should be considered a poem or short story. Throughout the write, poetic verses and regular sentence structure were utilized. The use of language ranged from current to that particular era, so you may want to revisit this piece in an effort to give it the complete "Arthurian" feel. Overall, my reading of this quest has been an enjoyable one. You are certainly on the correct path.
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